Question

书面表达

假如你要在学校英语兴趣小组活动中发言，请你写一篇70字左右的发言稿, 可适当发挥。要点如下：

1. 两个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。从那时起，奶奶一直跳广场舞。

2. 现在，奶奶比以前更健康，有更多的朋友，她每天很开心。

3. 有些邻居认为音乐太吵，晚上让人无法入睡， 他们希望安静更好。

4. 你认为人们可以跳广场舞，因为对老年人健康有好处。但音乐不能太吵，安静安全最重要，我们应该拥有安静健康的生活。(跳广场舞 do square dancing)

Boys and girls,

I am very happy to speak here and I would like to talk about my grandma.

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That's all. Thank you.

Answer

Boys and girls,

I am very happy to speak here and I would like to talk about my grandma.

Two months ago, my grandma began to do square dancing after supper every day. Since then, my grandma have done it. Now she is much healthier, and she has more friends. She is very happy. But some neighbours think the music is too noisy. Because of the music they find it a little difficult to fall asleep. They hope it is better to be quiet.

I think old people can do square dancing because it is good for their health. But the music cannot be too noisy. It is the most important to be quiet and safe, We should live a quiet and healthy life.

That's all. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提纲作文