Question

书面表达

Millie 想推荐李华做班长根据提示和要求写一篇推荐信。

内容要点如下:

1、你想推荐李华当班长；他自信……

2、他乐于助人，深受同学喜欢；

3、精力充沛，经常做额外的工作……

4、谦虚，从不炫耀；

5、总共赢过6次科学竞赛；

6、你认为……

注意：

1、推荐信必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

2、省略号的地方必须用1-2句话适当发挥；

3、词数90个左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总次数。

Dear Mr Wu,

I’m writing to recommend Li Hua

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____________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,

Millie

Answer

Dear Mr Wu,

I’m writi ng to recommend Li Hua as our monitor.

As everybody knows, Li Hua is the best student in our class and I think he is the most suitable candidate for the monitor.

Firstly, he is highly intelligent and hard working. He does extremely well in his lessons and always get A’s in all his subjects. Furthermore, he is never too proud of his achievements.

Secondly, he is warm-hearted and always ready to help others. For example, last May our classmates Zhang Ming broke his legs in a basketball match and he had to stay in bed for a month. It was Li Hua that offered to help him with lessons every day. As a result, Zhang Ming was able to catch up with others in studies.

Thirdly, Li Hua takes an active part in all kinds of social activities, such as donating money to the children in the poor areas, helping the disabled and the old do whatever they need, and so on..

Generally speaking, Li Hua is qualified to be our monitor.

Yours sincerely,

Millie

【解析】

试题分析：本次写作任务是推荐李华做班长，根据提示和要求写一篇推荐信。具体到本次写作，考生要先审清题目要求，确定好作文人称、时态、写作要点、段落等基本内容。明确作文的基本内容后，就是选用准确的词汇和恰当的句子来表达。其中要特别注意最后一点，我们需要用自己的话来将这一条补充完整，这就需要我们发挥自己的想象力，补充的内容要符合上下文的文意。写作时，要适当使用一些句型、句式，使文章表达流畅。

写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如do well in，For example，As a result，catch up with, takes an active part in，and so on，generally speaking，be qualified to；还运用句型It was Li Hua that offered to help him with lessons every day.这句运用强调句；Li Hua takes an active part in all kinds of social activities, such as donating money to the children in the poor areas, helping the disabled and the old do whatever they need, and so on.这句运用了非谓语动词。并注意了句子的衔接如：Furthermore，Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等等。

考点：提纲作文。