Question

书面表达(15分)

凉爽的秋日适合旅行，本周末你打算和同学们将进行一次野外徒步旅行，现在请你以Mr Dong的名义拟一份通知（开头已给出）。词数 70个左右。文中不得出现真实的姓名和班级，通知应包括以下内容(次序不限)：

1. Where are you going?

2. When are you leaving?

3. Where are you leaving from?

4. What should the students take with them?

5. What are you doing there?

6.How long are you staying there?.....

参考词汇：this weekend    Mountain Huang ( Mountain Yangdang  …)   go hiking

leave  leave for...（前往……）    raincoat（雨衣）   backpack    stay there for...

visit   take photos    take … with … 把……带在某人身边       …

Boys and girls,

Tomorrow is Saturday._________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer

Boys and girls,

Tomorrow is Saturday.We are going to Mountain Huang. We are going hiking there. Please remember the time well, we are leaving at 7 o'clock in the morning, don't be late! We are going there on the school bus, so remember to be at the school gate on time! And don't forget to bring your raincoat, it may rain tomorrow, We are going to have a picnic and take photos there and we are staying there for two days, So we are going back on Monday.

Mr.Dong

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and、also等词，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。