Question

书面表达（共15分）

根据单词提示，给你的笔友写一封信，附上一张家庭照片，并对照片进行详细的介绍。

要求：词数不少于40，格式正确，书写认真。

参考词语：family photo，grandparents，mother，father，aunt，uncle，cousin

Answer

My family

This is my family photo .There are three people in my family.My parents and I.My father is a doctor,He works in a big hospital.He is very friendly to his patients. He likes playing soccer very much. My mother is a teacher, She works in a school.She is very popular with her students, but she is very strict with me. I am a student. I study in a middle school. I often play soccer with my father and we are enjoy ourselves.I love my parents very much.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是对自己家人的介绍，所以句子用一般现在时，提醒学生注意的是要注意主谓一致，用适当的连词，可以增加短文的亮点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：There are three people in my family. He is very friendly to his patients. He likes playing soccer very much. She is very popular with her students,用了一些连词but等，增加了文章的色彩。

考点：话题作文。