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假定你是李华,你在网上购买的商品到货了,但拆封之后发现质量并没有想象的那么好。请你给商家写封电子邮件,表达自己的合理诉求。内容包括:

1.写电子邮件的目的;

2.产品回题描述;

3.你期待商家如何解决问题。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 邮件的开头及结尾已为你写好。

Dear Sir or madam,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

One possible version: Dear sir or madam, I received the T-shirt which I purchased from your online store the other day. However, there is something wrong that I think it’s necessary to write to you about what happened. After I unpacked the express parcel and put on the T-shirt, I found that its quality is not as good as what you showed in the store advertisement, let alone what the customer service staff promised to me. Feeling a little disappointed, I really want to get your explanation and solution to it. Look forward to your reply as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封电子邮件,向网店商家表达自己的合理诉求。 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。 结构:总分法    总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:1. 说明写信目的 2. 描述产品问题 3. 期待商家解决问题 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) online store;purchase;goods;as soon as possible;reflect problems;quality;unpack 第三步:连词成句 1. Recently I have got the goods purchased in your online store. 2. But I found some problems about the goods. 3. So I wrote this letter to reflect the problems. 4. The quality of the goods is not good as what I imagine. 5. I need your reasonable reply about this. 6. Look forward to your reply as soon as possible. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改
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