Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My mother was driving alone to a city 192 kilometer away. At first, she feels pretty good about the trip. But her joy was disappeared when she saw smoke coming from the car. She had to pull over immediate. She was at loss what to do when a truck stopped behind her car. A gentleman got off but came over to help. She checked the car, heading to his truck and came back with two fire beaters. He said that he sold fire beaters, so his truck was full off them. And he said jokingly that it was my mother lucky day.

Answer

1. kilometer →kilometers

2. feels →felt

3. 去掉was

4. immediate →immediately

5. at后加a

6. but →and

7. She →He

8. heading →headed

9. off →of

10. mother →mother’s

【解析】

本文是记叙文。作者讲述了妈妈独自开车去192公里以外的一个城市，在路上汽车出了故障，妈妈不知所措，幸好遇到了一位卖灭火器的绅士，帮助了妈妈。

1.考查名词。kilometer“公里”是可数名词，由192修饰，用复数，故将kilometer改为kilometers。

2.考查动词时态。根据上文的was driving可知，讲述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时，故将feels改为felt。

3.考查动词。disappear是不及物动词，无被动式，故去掉disappeared前的was。

4.考查副词。修饰动词had to pull over，用副词形式作状语，故将immediate改为immediately。

5.考查固定短语。at a loss“不知所措”是固定短语，故at后加a。

6.考查连词。句意：一位绅士下了车，过来帮忙。前后文是并列关系，不是转折关系，故将but改为and。

7.考查代词。句意：他检查了汽车，走向他的卡车，拿了两个灭火器回来了。此处指上文提到的gentleman，是位男士，故将She改为He。

8.考查谓语动词。句意同上。分析句子可知，check，head和come back表示一系列动作，是并列谓语，表示过去的一系列动作，用一般过去时，故将heading改为headed。

9.考查固定短语。句意：他说他卖灭火器，因此他的卡车装满了灭火器。be full of“充满”是固定短语，故将off改为of。

10.考查名词所有格。修饰名词day，用名词所有格。故将mother改为mother’s。