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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I took part in an English Speech Contest last week. As only competitor from our class, I had to compete with 14 other excellent participants selecting from the whole school. When it is my turn, I got a little bit nervous at first, but soon I calmed me down at the thought of my English teacher’s instructions. Then anything went smoothly. I performed so good that the judges and audiences gave me a big round of applause. Although the question-and-answer section was the most challenging, but I managed to get through properly. When the judge announced the finally result, I was excited that I won first prize, that was totally beyond my imagination.

 

【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章介绍了作者参加英语演讲比赛时的心情,刚开始的时候作者还有点紧张,但想到英语老师的指导后作者表现得就非常好了,并且还获得了一等奖。 1. 考查定冠词。句意:作为我们班唯一的参赛选手,我不得不与全校选拔的另外十四名优秀的选手进行竞争。分析句子可知,only意为“仅有的;唯一的”,是特指某一个人或物,因此需使用定冠词the,故在only前加the。 2. 考查固定搭配。句意:我作为我们班唯一的参赛选手,我不得不与全校选拔的另外十四名优秀的选手进行竞争。分析句子可知,此处应为固定词组compete against,意为“与……竞争”,against更加强调竞争意味。故将with改为against。 3. 考查非谓语。句意:作为我们班唯一的参赛选手,我不得不与全校选拔的另外十四名优秀的选手进行竞争。分析句子可知,句中真正的谓语为“had to compete with”,participants与select之间是逻辑上的被动关系,意为“被选择的”,因此需使用过去分词作后置定语修饰participants,故将selecting改为selected。 4.考查动词时态。句意:轮到我的时候,起初我有一点紧张,但我想到英语老师的指导后,我很快就平静下来了。分析文章内容可知,全文使用了一般过去时,为保持时态一致性,该句中的谓语动词也应使用一般过去时。故将is改为was。 5. 考查代词/固定词组。句意:轮到我的时候,起初我有一点紧张,但我想到英语老师的指导后,我很快就平静下来了。分析句子可知,该句中的主语和宾语指代的人是同一人,因此需使用反身代词,且此处calm down是固定词组,意为“冷静下来”,可作不及物动词词组,因此可去掉me。故将me改为myself或去掉me。 6. 考查代词。句意:然后一切都顺利了起来。分析文章内容可知,anything意为“任何事情;随便什么事物”,常用语疑问句或否定句中,而此处应表示作者在演讲比赛中遇到的所有事情,且该句是肯定句,故将anything改为everything。 7. 考查副词。句意:我表现的非常好,评委和观众们都给予我非常大的掌声。分析句子可知,句中需用副词修饰动词performed。故将good改为well。 8. 考查连词。句意:尽管问答环节是非常有挑战性的,但我还是完成的非常好。分析句子可知,although是从属连词,引导让步状语从句,but是并列连词,连接两个句子成为并列句。如果这两个连词在句子中同时使用,该句中则缺少主句,因此一个句子中,although和but不能同时出现,这两者是非此即彼的关系。故去掉but。 9. 考查形容词。句意:当评委宣布最终结果的时候,我很兴奋我获得了第一名,这完全超出了我的想象。分析句子可知,名词result需用形容词进行修饰。故将finally改为final。 10. 考查关系代词。句意:当评委宣布最终结果的时候,我很兴奋我获得了第一名,这完全超出了我的想象。分析句子可知,这是非限制性定语从句,不能使用that进行引导,且从句中缺少主语成分,因此需使用关系代词which指代前文的内容。故将that改为which。  
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