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The reasons why I expect to studying in your university are as follows. The first thing that occur to me is its excellence in finance, which I am interested in it as my major. Varieties of strengths allow me the courage apply for admission. Firstly, good social skills and strong organizing ability are that I have acquired in high school thanks for the experience of serving as monitor. I have learned to keep the good balance between work and study. I also get the award of Outstanding Student Leader last year. Besides. I have several hobby，such as dancing, playing erhu , and playing badminton.
I will feel great honored if I can be admitted.
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Around 200 more warriors from ancient China’s Terracotta Army (兵马俑）have been unearthed at the tomb of Emperor Qin Shi Huang. The discovery was made during the 1. (late) round of excavations}（挖掘）of No. 1 Pit in an area covering 400 square meters.
Shen Maosheng, who led the dig, said most of the newly found warriors can be divided into two groups. One group is carrying poles, while 2. other carries bows.
The Terracotta Army, 3. (build) around 2,200 years ago, was intended to protect Emperor Qin Shi Huang in his afterlife. The army, 4. consists of about 130 chariots， over 500 horses，8，000 soldiers，was gathered in three main pits near to the emperor ‘s tomb.
It was first discovered in 1974 by farmers 5. (dig) in northwest China. The tomb is believed6.(cover) around 38 square miles and, along7. the Terracotta Army, contains a large grave of laborers and craftsmen. The8.(construct) is believed to have taken around 30 years to complete.
Archaeologists started a new excavation at No. 1 Pit in 2009. The 200 new warriors 9. (find) as a result of this effort. 10. (scientist) are still working to understand how this vast army was created.
A parent’s hopes for 2030
When 2010 arrived, my son was only a year old—tiny._______，the master of a few basic words, but still mostly the baby we'd _______into the world.
Now my baby has grown into an _______—tall, strong,stout, and smart, a(n) _______ of Akira Kurosawa samurai movies.
A _______from now, in 2030, he will be an adult. I expect the next 10 years to fly by, and be filled with _______. As 2020 begins. I am thinking about the kind of world my son will_______ and experience. I _______ for him, and for all the young people of his age. So I have several _______for the world my son and his generation will live in：
I hope we finally get__________about climate change. Polar ice is melting. The oceans are __________ . The question is __________whether we can stop climate change，but whether we ‘re willing and able to do anything to __________ it.
I’m not sure what a warming planet will__________ for my son's life. I suspect it means he will live in a world where nations and groups __________ limited resources like clean water and food, which means that the danger of climate change won't come just from rising oceans, but from other humans competing for control over what’s __________
The world is always going to be full of __________about how to solve the challenges we face. I hope，too，that my son’s generation learns to __________justice—but to do so with big heart and humility，recognizing our common humanity(人性）even with people who __________ us.
The world of 2030 won’t __________ itself. We are creating it now, so my final wish is that we build the kind of world we actually want our children to live in.
1.A.special B.generous C.intelligent D.dependent
2.A.welcomed B.raised C.grown D.congratulated
3.A.athlete B.adolescent C.artist D.engineer
4.A.director B.author C.lover D.reader
5.A.month B.century C.year D.decade
6.A.questions B.experience C.danger D.change
7.A.create B.notice C.face D.shake
8.A.worry B.sacrifice C.provide D.arrange
9.A.plans B.methods C.hopes D.choices
10.A.particular B.serious C.optimistic D.enthusiastic
11.A.drying B.rising C.growing D.cooling
12.A.for sure B.as usual C.no longer D.till now
13.A.slow B.record C.complete D.oppose
14.A.mean B.obtain C.share D.seek
15.A.pick up B.fight over C.turn down D.take part
16.A.finished B.continued C.started D.left
17.A.aims B.examples C.disagreements D.results
18.A.escape B.express C.seek D.affect
19.A.differ from B.agree with C.refer to D.call for
20.A.blame B.admire C.prove D.build
Sales motivation is about being able to get yourself or your sales team to do what needs to be done when it needs to be done. It’s the ability to get yourself to take action whether you feel like it or not. In sales, one of the toughest aspects is having to deal with constant rejection. 1.
2. Guess what the lowest paid profession in the world is? That’s right，also sales. Anyone can get a jobs that pays on salary or by the hour and make a certain secure amount of money every month but it takes a certain type of person to be able to control the amount he or she earns each year. The profession of sales is not for the weak minded person.
Mental toughness in sales is about the ability to have 99 people say “No” to you and still be fully confident that the 100th person will say “Yes”. How many people do you think can go in and talk to the 100th potential client with the same enthusiasm and excitement that he or she had with their prospect? 3.
Sales is truly one of the few professions where a person with no educational background, with no talent or skilIs, can become one of the highest paid，most respected people around. What it really take isn't brains, or a nice expensive suit, or even knowing the right people to begin with. 4. It's that sales person who will not stop making cold calls until he/she gets the amount of appointments necessary to achieve his/her goal.
5. If you are in sales, then you can literally change your entire life around, from poverty and broke, to wealthy and fulfilled. If you are in a leadership position, realize that you have the opportunity to help change people’s lives. Learn everything you can about motivation and there will be no limits to what you can achieve.
A.Not many at all.
B.Sales can be a life changing profession.
C.This is why most people fail to be a success in the field of sales.
D.The ability to inspire confidence in your team will make you a true leader.
E.Sales happens to be the number one highest paid profession in the world.
F.Here are some videos that may help take your sales career to the next level.
G.What it takes to be successful in sales is a burning desire to be the best at it.
Giant, krill-eating whales could grow even bigger if the size and availability of their prey (猎物）could keep up，a new study finds.
Whales are the heaviest animals to have ever lived on our planet. These marine giants evolved from dog-sized four-legged land creatures and grew nearly 10,000 times bigger in the past 50 million years or so, according to Nicholas Pyenson, head of fossil marine mammals at the Smithsonian's National Museum of Natural History.
Creatures benefit from having a bigger size in a number of different ways, whether it’s not getting eaten by smaller creatures or having the ability to keep warm and travel great distances more efficiently. Still, some whale species are bigger than others, and they do have some limits to their size.
To find out what these limits are， researcher attached multisensor equipment to many types of whales. The researcher also assessed prey type and quantity using different methods. For baleen whale prey，they used acoustic(声学的) equipment to test the density (密度）of krill patches. For toothed whales, they looked at the size and quantity of squid(鱿鱼）beaks and otoliths (parts of the inner ear) found in the stomachs of beached whales.
Putting all the data together, they could determine how much energy the whales were likely to get back from the food. For toothed whales, the limiting factor seems to be the size of their prey. Sperm whales were found to feed mostly on medium-sized squid—possibly because there aren’t as many giant squid in the ocean. Baleen whales, like blue whales swallow massive mouthfuls of krill or other small creature. But these small creatures only appear in large concentrations for a few months per year in some areas ,which may be the limiting factor for the growth of the largest whales.
A researcher said that it ‘s not completely clear that baleen whales have finished growing. “Perhaps several million years into the future we’ ll see something even larger than a blue whale.”
1.What can we infer from the second paragraph?
A.Whales kept growing during evolution.
B.Whales evolved from dogs on the land.
C.Whales used to be four-legged fish.
D.The number of krill-eating whales would keep up.
2.How do whales benefit from their size?
A.They are more expert at traveling.
B.They can produce energy more easily.
C.They have better chances to survive.
D.They can be eaten by smaller creatures.
3.How did the researchers carry out the study?
A.Testing the density of whales with acoustic equipment.
B.Using different methods for different types of whales.
C.Calculating the amount of food in baleen whales’ stomachs.
D.Assessing the type and quantity of different whales.
4.What may stop whales from growing even bigger?
A.The amount of food.
B.The availability of equipment.
C.The size of their stomachs.
D.The concentrations of the whales.
In the future，we may not need to rely on human donations for life-saving skin grafts(移植）.
That’s the goal of Xeno Therapeutics, a biotech non-profit organization. The US Food and Drug Administration approved the group’s initial application for temporary skin grafts removed from genetically modified(基因改良）pigs. This means that they can start testing pig skin grafts on people who have experienced severe burns.
Skin，the body’s largest organ，plays an important role in blocking pathogens(病原体） from reaching our organs inside. It also helps the body keep a constant temperature. People with severe skin damage are at a high risk of developing deadly infections as a result of changes in temperature.
At the moment, the only skin grafts available in the US come from the dead people who have agreed to be organ donors, or patients who have gone through surgery to remove skin after large weight loss. These human skins used for grafts are not easy to find.
Xeno Therapeutics, which gets its name from animal-to-human transplants, has raised pigs that have skin remarkably similar to our own. Grafts from these pigs are therefore more likely to hide without being detected by the host's immune system—at least temporarily. The idea is that they could be used for immediate burn treatment, followed human skin graft treatment later.
“I’d say that just like comparing a Coke with Pepsi，it would be hard to tell which was the human skin and which was the pig graft，” said Xeno Therapeutics CEO Paul Holzer.
The non-profit organization has been working to conduct the clinical trials, which will only be testing the grafts’ safety and tolerability in six patients with severe burns. Assuming the results are positive after a month, the grafts will need to pass through two more stages of testing before they can be approved for widespread clinical use.
Several other groups around the world are working to make animal organs suitable for clinical medicine. In Brazil, researchers are exploring using tilapia skin as temporary bandages for burn victims whose skin is regrowing.
1.What’s the aim of Xeno Therapeutics?
A.To make profit from the grafts. B.To apply pig skin on human patients.
C.To modify pigs genetically. D.To test people with severe burns.
2.Why is skin important to human body?
A.It acts as a protective layer for our body. B.It helps us recover from deadly diseases.
C.It prevents itself from being damaged. D.It keeps one’s temperature changing.
3.What is Paul Holzer’s attitudes towards the pig skin grafts?
A.Doubtful. B.Worried.
C.Confident. D.Flexible.
4.What can we know about the grafts?
A.Only skin removed from pigs can be used for grafts.
B.Brazilian doctors have also applied pig skin for grafts.
C.Animal skin has been used on six patients safely.
D.They won't be put to use until they pass test
