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假如你是李华,假期观看了主题是人与自然的电影《狼图腾》 (Wolf Totem)...

假如你是李华,假期观看了主题是人与自然的电影《狼图腾》 (Wolf Totem)深有感触。你写了一篇观后感准备给你们学校的校报英语版投稿,现在你通过电子邮件将这篇观后感发给英国笔友Tom,请他帮忙在下周三之前完成修改,并把这部电影推荐给他。

注意:1.词数100左右:

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Dear Tom, How is everything going? During the holidays I saw a film called Wolf Totem, whose theme is people and nature. The film is really a hit in China. Have you heard of it? After seeing the film, deeply touched, I wrote a review and now I intend to contribute it to my school newspaper. I have attached it to this email. Will you please help me correct the grammatical mistakes and polish the article? If possible, you'd better finish it by next Wednesday. I would appreciate it if you could help me. By the way, the film is really wonderful. I know you are a film fan. Therefore, 1 strongly recommend it t0 you. I am convinced that you will fall in love with it as well. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封书信,请英国笔友Tom帮忙修改你写的电影《狼图腾》的观后感,并把这部电影推荐给他。 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文; 人称:第一人称; 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时; 结构:总-分-总法 第二步:列提纲 (重点单词和词组) hear of;deeply touched;intend to;contribute to;attach..to;if possible;appreciate;by the way recommend...to;convince;fall in love with;as well;look forward to等; 第三步:连词成句 1. During the holidays I saw a film called Wolf Totem, whose theme is people and nature. 2. After seeing the film, deeply touched, I wrote a review and now I intend to contribute it to my school newspaper. 3. If possible, you'd better finish it by next Wednesday. I would appreciate it if you could help me. 4. Therefore, 1 strongly recommend it t0 you. 5. I am convinced that you will fall in love with it as well. 6. Looking forward to your early reply. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表并列补充关系:and;if possible;by the way等; 2.表因果关系:Therefore等; 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步:润色修改
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