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Ever since I was a small child, I had enjoyed doing exercise, either indoor or outdoor. Keep fit is important to me and I used to spend a couple of hours at the gym every week. But I was finding that a bit bored. I’d thought of swimming, and the nearest pool was too far away. I’d heard from boxing and I was mentioned it to my elder brother. He just said, “Why not give it try?” So I went to a club and it was at the club where I found I enjoyed them. Of course, to be superb, which I needed was a lot of training.
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After MoYan, Tu Youyou, a Chinese doctor, became the second Chinese 1. (receive) the great award “the Nobel Prize”. She made the 2. (discover) of artemisinin (青蒿素) ,
a treatment for malaria (疟疾) 3. has saved millions of lives across the world, especially in the developing world.
Each year, several hundred million people suffer malaria. Without treatment, many more of them would die now. Tu led a team that transformed an ancient Chinese healing method4. the most powerful medicine. The malaria affects children 5. (particular) hard, especially those in sub-Saharan Africa. It affects more than 100 countries, including those in Asia, Latin America, the Middle East, parts of Europe—and travelers from everywhere.
In the late 1950s, the WHO worked on the project to fight with malaria, 6. failed. Tu, along with her group, analyzed ancient texts and folk cures for possible treatment after 7. (appoint) head of the Project 523 research group, a team to fight with malaria in China. Tu collected 2000 samples by 8. (she). By 1971, her team 9. (make) 380 extracts (提取) from 200 herbs.
Finally, Tu discovered the treatment, 10. (save) hundreds of millions of people all around the world, so she deserved the prize and our respect.
Eldrick Tiger Woods, nicknamed ''Tiger'', is probably the most famous golfer in his days. It was he who first made golf a global _________ and it was practice that made Tiger Woods a champion golfer.
When he was very young, Tiger Woods _________ golf. Since then, he played it whenever he had the chance. _________ with other children of his age, he showed special interest in golf. Finding that his son had a _________ for this game, Tiger's father decided to _________ him on his own. To his father's surprise, Tiger was a(n) _________ golfer even at the age of 6.
However, being a child, Tiger couldn’t focus all the time, _________ he never gave up. Tiger listened to soft music to improve his _________. His father helped him learn to focus in spite of the _________. Sometimes his father stood in front of Tiger and said, ''I'm a tree in your way, '' He would have to hit the ball __________ his father. Sometimes his father would dance and sing when it was Tiger's turn to hit and Tiger had to focus on the __________.
The training helped him. Once a __________ made a loud noise while Tiger was playing. He said he never heard the broadcast because he was so __________ on the game. Tiger cannot __________ losing. If he loses, he will go out and __________ even harder in order not to make the same mistake.
In the year 2000, when he was 24 years old, he __________ four major golf competitions—the US Open, the US Amateur, the British Open and the British Amateur. But during the 2008 season it became clear that Tiger was __________ pain in his knee. In April his knee was operated on and he __________ the PGA (美国职业高尔夫球协会) tour season. After an eight-month period of __________ he returned to play again in February 2009. He didn't make his fans __________—he won again.
He is so much better than the other golfers that some say he is the greatest golfer to ever play the game.
1.A.action B.practice C.sport D.exercise
2.A.looked up B.set up C.took up D.gave up
3.A.Mixed B.Competing C.Playing D.Compared
4.A.trick B.plan C.skill D.gift
5.A.train B.save C.stop D.raise
6.A.lucky B.common C.excellent D.careful
7.A.and B.but C.so D.as
8.A.confidence B.strength C.patience D.speed
9.A.disturbance B.carelessness C.determination D.failure
10.A.against B.under C.onto D.over
11.A.music B.ball C.dance D.ground
12.A.teammate B.kid C.radio D.fan
13.A.curious B.happy C.relied D.concentrated
14.A.tolerate B.forget C.understand D.recognize
15.A.cry B.practice C.think D.argue
16.A.judged B.watched C.conducted D.won
17.A.examining B.avoiding C.suffering D.reducing
18.A.missed B.offered C.escaped D.joined
19.A.research B.rest C.learning D.traveling
20.A.worried B.troubled C.surprised D.disappointed
Rising through stages to realize ourselves
Many modern people have the problem that they don’t know who they are and what their purpose is. 1. Once high school seniors graduate, they seem to lose their identity. They once studied hard. But after they stop working, they begin to lose their way.
In the theory of the Hierarchy of Needs（需求理论）, Abraham Maslo, put forward a similar situation, which consists of the five levels of a person’s need. The fifth and final level is self-realization, which is where our final achievement lies. 2.
I think self- realization has three major aspects. The first stage is acceptance, the second stage is discovery and the last stage is perseverance.
Acceptance is the first stage. We should be reminded that we are all born unique, so we all have our own strengths and weaknesses. Only when we understand these, can we pursue them or
change them. 3.
Once we’ve accepted ourselves, we can discover what we are interested in and what we want to be. 4.but indeed we should live for ourselves. So before we start working towards a purpose, we should ask ourselves “Is this what we truly desire?” and “Is this going to change the situation we’re in?”
The last stage is perseverance.5. Those who can self-realize are people who focus on the things they want to change.
Through the three stages, we could gain recognition of ourselves. And by this point, whatever our lives were like, we would be able to stand tall, confident of ourselves.
A. It’s nothing to a man of perseverance
B. Only by acceptance of the past can we change it
C. This is especially common among college students
D. Many people tend to go along with social expectations
E. Being objective and yet tolerant is the key to acceptance
F. It is the process of knowing ourselves and finding a purpose
G. Exploring our potential isn’t going to be done in a short time
Dyslexia (失读症) is a reading and writing disability characterized by difficulties in reading and spelling, and for some readers to understand what they have read. Experts say dyslexia affects about five to ten percent of the population of the United States. Researchers have long known that people with dyslexia write or read words and letters backwards in the wrong order.
But a new study shows that people with dyslexia may have trouble redirecting (重新传入) their attention between senses, from seeing something to hearing something. Vanessa Harrar of Britain's University of Oxford led the study. She reported the findings in the journal Current Biology. The study suggests that dyslexic people may have trouble moving quickly from what they read to what they hear. Doctor Harrar calls this a sluggish shifting of attention across the senses.
''So, if you are trying to read something and then trying to listen to somebody who's reading aloud and you're trying to follow along with what they are reading, they have to switch their attention from hearing what they are saying to looking at the piece of paper and back again. '' said Harrar.
She found that people with dyslexia were just as fast as the others when they saw only a picture or heard only a sound. But the dyslexics had a slower reaction time when they heard a sound and saw a picture at the same time.
Doctor Harrar feels like playing action video games could help dyslexic people shift from seeing to hearing more quickly. She adds that images in video games force the eyes to move and focus quickly.
''Video game types of things pop out of here and there, they move your eyes around the screen quickly in response to things quite quickly, and the more you play a video game the faster you get that kind of thing. So the video game is really training the attention system to move quickly, '' said Harrar.
The study also shows that dyslexic people have the most difficulty going between what they saw and what they heard, this may have an effect on how dyslexic children are taught how to read. When children learn the alphabet, they usually see the letter first and then hear the sound, or they see and hear the letter at the same time. The study shows that dyslexics might learn more quickly if they hear the sound of a letter or word first before seeing it.
1.Dyslexic people have the following problems except _________.
A.writing or reading words and letters in the right order
B.redirecting their attention between senses, from seeing something to hearing something
C.moving quickly from what they read to what they hear
D.seeing a picture or hearing a sound
2.What does the underlined word ''sluggish'' in paragraph 2 mean？
A.Slow. B.Wrong.
C.Specific. D.Accurate.
3.Why can playing video games help dyslexic people learn more quickly?
A.Because they will train their reading and hearing.
B.Because they will have a good knowledge of the system.
C.Because they can train the attention system to move quickly.
D.Because they can arouse their interest in reading and learning.
4.What is the importance of the finding?
A.People with dyslexia will be cured by playing video games.
B.People with dyslexia will not be made fun of by others.
C.People will play more video games for dyslexic children.
D.People will know how to teach dyslexic children to read.
Ten years ago, a typical patient at my plastic surgery clinic in McLean, Va., was 47 or 48. They generally wanted to look like a younger version of themselves. This might mean a face or neck lift, eyelid lifts, a skin-resurfacing procedure or Botox (肉毒杆菌) injections. ''What do you recommend? '' they'd ask. This is the kind of work I am expecting to do, and these are the consultations I am expecting to give.
Today, my average patient, according to my office records, is 38 or 39. They'll come in with a specific ''flaw'' on their faces and often know exactly what procedure they want. They are pretty sure that their noses are too big, their chins are too large, or their eyebrows appear dull. And these patients are much less realistic about what I can achieve. They will ask for Kim Kardashian's nose, even if their facial structure looks nothing like hers.
There’s a reason for this rapid and radical change: selfies. The self-taken photograph is greatly attacking the confidence of many younger people. They come to my offices, show me their selfies and point to a defect on their faces, which is a totally normal shape to me. Often they will have already searched online till they’ve found someone with a similar “issue” who fixed it with surgery. Once, a 20-year-old, having studied countless images of herself and searched hundreds of pictures of the ideal looks she wanted, said she needed a facelift. But to me, no 20-year-old needs a facelift.
Selfies also mislead people about how they look. Smartphone cameras get better each year, but photos taken at arm’s length or closer often produce a ''fish eye'' effect: whatever's at the center of the photo is bigger, and things on the edge are smaller. A study published in JAMA Facial Plastic Surgery last year found that selfies make noses look 30 percent larger than they are.
A survey done by the American Society of Plastic Surgeons last year found that social media was driving more plastic surgery requests than any other social influence: more than TV, movies or magazines. People are spending more time looking at themselves, in an online environment where comparisons with others seem inevitable. Academic psychologist Brian Feinstein, who studied a sample of 268 college-age adults, has found that the more people use social media, the more they reflect on their own supposed drawbacks, and therefore causes self-confidence to drop.
1.Why did the author's typical patients want plastic surgery ten years ago?
A.They were recommended to do so.
B.They were unsatisfied with the faces they were born with.
C.They’d like to look younger than they really were.
D.The author expected them to do so.
2.What can we know about Kim Kardashian?
A.She is a patient of the author's.
B.She is a model who has a beautiful nose.
C.She is a doctor of plastic surgery.
D.She is a fan of plastic surgery.
3.What can we learn from Paragraph four?
A.Smartphone cameras can help people take better selfies.
B.Smartphone cameras make people look at their selfies through a fish eye.
C.People usually take photos at arm's length or closer.
D.Smartphone cameras make people's faces in a selfie unreal.
4.Which of the following would be the best title of the passage?
A.Selfies Are Weakening Self-confidence.
B.Young People Like to Take Selfies.
C.More People Are Getting Plastic Surgery.
D.People Like to Look Better in Selfies.
