Question

假如你是高中生李月， 有感于校园中存在的随意涂写，乱丢垃圾的行为，请用英语给校长写一封信:1. 说明写信目的2. 对这些行为进行批评 3.提出建议

提示:随意涂写，乱丢垃圾的现象 the phenomenon of scribbling and littering

批评 criticize

Dear Mr Headmaster,

I am Li Yue, a student from class 1, Senior III.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

Answer

Dear Mr Headmaster,

I am Li Yue, a student from class 1, Senior III. I am writing to tell you that the phenomenon of scribbling and littering can't be any worse, which is indeed a humiliation to our school, but ironically, seemingly everyone pretends to get used to the phenomenon. Those who commit such immoral things should not only be criticized but also be punished.

There is no doubt that urgent measures should be taken. First, all of us should be educated so that the awareness of protecting environment can be promoted. In fact, it's the ignorance of the education about environmental protection that is the root of the phenomenon. Second, more importance should be attached to carrying civic virtue forward. It is wrong to just put study in the first place but turn a blind eye to developing healthy individual personality. Above all, a good balance should be achieved between them. What's more, it is time that related rules should be set up. Whoever goes against them should be punished. Meanwhile，good examples should be set for the students who can develop good habits and behave better. last but not least, why not set up slogans or hold activities to encourage good behavior? It can be a reminder that uncivilized behavior is shameful.

I am convinced that our efforts will pay off at last and our school is bound to be a good place for us to study.

【解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 说明写信目的2. 对这些行为进行批评 3.提出建议。第二，人称以第三人称为主，第一人称兼用。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，1. 说明写信目的2. 对这些行为进行批评。第二段提出建议。第三段，表达希望。其中第二段为重点段落。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:humiliation, root, ignorance, commit, immoral, be criticized, be punished, be educated ,be promoted, be attached to ,civic virtue ,individual, personality, develop good habits, uncivilized behavior ,the phenomenon of scribbling and littering, pay off .

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:I am writing to tell you that the phenomenon of scribbling and littering can't be any worse, which is indeed a humiliation to our school. Those who commit such immoral things should not only be criticized but also be punished. There is no doubt that urgent measures should be taken. it's the ignorance of the education about environmental protection that is the root of the phenomenon. whoever goes against them should be punished. It can be a reminder that uncivilized behavior is shameful.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First, In fact, Second, Above all, What's more, Meanwhile.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。