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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.

修改在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

In life,we make many decisions,some of what are so important that they affect us greatly. My latest decision is made when I entered Senior 3 in Miss Zhang's class. Since I was not good in English,Miss Zhang asked me to listen attentive in class and put down some notes. Therefore,I was never a good listener. I went on in my own way,ignore her suggestions completely until Miss Zhang had talk with me. He made me realize the importance of note-taking. From this experience,I have realized a good decision benefits from people. We should learn to take others' advices and do the right things.

 

第一句 what改成which 第二句 is改成was 第三句 in改成at;attentive改成attentively 第四句 Therefore改成However 第五句 ignore改成ignoring;had后面加上a 第六句 He改成She 第七句 去掉from 第八句 advices改成advice 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章作者通过讲述自己学习英语的亲身经历,说明了我们应该听取别人的建议,做正确的事情。 第一处:考查非限制性定语从句。some of which are so important that they affect us greatly.是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是decisions,some of + 关系代词引导的定语从句,指物,用which,what不用于定语从句,故what改成which。 第二处:考查时态。作者在回忆往事,用一般过去时,故is改成was。 第三处:考查固定短语。题干中表示“我不擅长英语”,be good at擅长,该短语是固定短语,故in改成at。 第四处:考查副词。这里修饰动词listen,应该用副词,故attentive改成attentively。 第五处:考查副词。句意:然而,我不是一个好的倾听者。题干中表示“然而……”,转折关系,故Therefore改成However。 第六处:考查非谓语动词。ignore的逻辑主语是I,它们之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词作状语,ignore改成ignoring。 第七处:考查固定句型。题干中表示“直到张老师和我谈话”,have a talk with sb.与……谈话,该句型是固定句型,所以had后面加上a。 第八处:考查代词。句意:她让我意识到记笔记的重要性。上文提到的“Miss Zhang”,是女性,故He改成She。 第九处:考查动词。句意:从这次经历,我明白了一个好的决定,让人们受益。benefit from从……得益,benefit可以用作及物动词,表示“受益”,故去掉from。 第十处:考查名词。advice是不可数名词,所以没有复数形式,advices改成advice。  
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