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假如某报社记者Smith正在调查我们学校学生与家庭成员和班级同学老师之间的关系处情况,请你把以上的情况向Smith反映并提出一些如何改进关系的意见。

要点如下:

1、目前的实际情况:学生与家庭成员以及班级同学的关系处理总体上是好的,但也存在着一些问题,与同学吵架,不听从家长和老师的教育等。

2、你个人的改进意见(至少两条)。

注意:1、适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 2、词数:100 字左右

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Basically, the relationship among us students ,our family ,classmates as well as teachers is good. However, there exist some problems. Some students in our school lose their temper easily because of anxiety or study burden. What’s worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing. In my opinion, we students should make every effort to improve the situation. First, we show trust to our parents out of respect and have a heart-to-heart talk with them, if possible. Second, when we are feeling upset, we can communicate more with our friends or teachers. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. 【解析】 本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生向Smith反映学生与家庭成员和班级同学老师之间的关系处情况,并提出一些如何改进关系的意见。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。 第1步:审题。根据提示可知本文是一封电子邮件,给Peter写信表示祝贺并请教学习方法。全文以一般过去时为主,使用一二人称。 第2步:组织要点。目前的实际情况:学生与家庭成员以及班级同学的关系处理总体上是好的,但也存在着一些问题,与同学吵架,不听从家长和老师的教育等。你个人的改进意见:尊敬父母与他们真诚交流;遇见困难时,多和老师同学沟通寻求帮助。 第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本篇范文结构完美,条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确,涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点,在介绍如何改进和他人关系时有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构,整篇文章富有变化,并不死板。 尽量运用了高级的语法结构,如费限制性定语从句…which is very disappointing.同时文章中还使用了较多的串联成分,如What’s worse等等,这些高级语法结构的运用提升了文章的层次,显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。  
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