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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

For 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. It’s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several times along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stop. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.

 

【解析】这是一篇记叙文。李先生年龄越来越大了,为了方便他散步休息,邻居们在他停留的地方放置了椅子。每当他经过休息的时候,大家就会意识到自己也要出去走走了。 第一处:时态用法错误。根据时间状语For 65 years和twice a day可知,这里用现在完成进行时,表示65年来一直持续的动作。句意:65年来,李先生一直在我们附近散步,一天两次。故将walk改为walking。 第二处:冠词用法错误。这里表达“一天两次”,用twice a day。故将the改为a。 第三处:非谓语动词用法错误。这里表达“退休的”,故用过去分词修饰。句意:他是一位退休的生物老师。故将retiring改为retired。 第四处:副词用法错误。根据上文可知,他散步的时候经常要休息,所以与本句形成转折关系。句意:然而,他仍然起得很早,坚持自己的习惯。故将Therefore改为However。 第五处:短语用法错误。短语stick to意为“坚持”。句意:他仍然起得很早,坚持自己的习惯。故在sticks后加to。 第六处:名词数用法错误。这里的名词stop为可数名词,意为“停留”,这里故用复数形式。句意:邻居们注意到了他的停留。故将stop改为stops。 第七处:代词用法错误。根据上文可知,这里代词应为his,表示“沿着他走的路线”。句意:我们沿着他的路线放置不同的椅子。故将our改为his。 第八处:时态用法错误。根据此句时态可知用一般现在时。句意:邀请他坐下来休息一会儿。故将took改为take。 第九处:动词用法错误。这里考查 see sb. do sth.(看见某人做某事)。句意:当我们看到李先生经过的时候。故将to去掉。 第十处:连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系。句意:我们意识到我们也应该出去散散步。故将but改为and。  
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