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假如你是高三学生李华,毕业后想去康奈尔大学(Cornell University)深造。请结合以下要点给康奈尔大学的负责人写一封电子邮件,希望获得奖学金。

1.自我介绍,包括英语水平、独立生活的能力以及与人沟通的能力;

2.希望获得奖学金;

3.希望得到答复。

注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’mLiHua.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua. I’m writing in the hope of obtaining a scholarship in Comell University for the bachelor’s degree. As a straight A student, I have a good command of both science and arts, especially English. I’ve passed TOEFL with an excellent score. Apart from my outstanding academic achievements, I take part in various after-class activities to improve my social skills and broaden my horizons, thus preparing me for an independent life. Furthermore, child as I am, I’m willing to help other. All in all, I believe I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for my further study. Thanks for your time and consideration. I’d appreciate it if my application could be approved of. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生把自己当成李华,毕业后想去康奈尔大学(Cornell University)深造。请结合以下要点给康奈尔大学的负责人写一封电子邮件,希望获得奖学金。全文使用一般现在时,使用第一人称为主。 第1步:审题。要求考生把自己当成李华,毕业后想去康奈尔大学(Cornell University)深造。请结合以下要点给康奈尔大学的负责人写一封电子邮件,希望获得奖学金。全文使用一般现在时,使用第一人称为主。 第2步:组织要点。自我介绍,包括英语水平、独立生活的能力以及与人沟通的能力;希望获得奖学金;希望得到答复。 第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意通知的格式和时态问题。 第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本篇范文结构完美,条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确,涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点,且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构,整篇文章富有变化,并不死板。尽量运用了高级的语法结构,如分词做状语…thus preparing me for an independent life.形式倒装句child as I am, 特殊句式I’d appreciate it if…。范文里还是要了一些高级词汇,如outstanding academic achievements、 appropriate qualifications等;同时文章在介绍志愿者要求的时候,使用了一些串联成分,如furthermore,等,这些串联词的运用让文章更有条理。这些写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次,显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。  
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The Amazing Penguin Rescue

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