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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day, I was walking to home after school while an old man fell heavily onto the snow-covered road. The number of people passed by, but no one took action. Some of them said it was none of our business; others worried that if they helped him, they might get into a difficult situation. Seeing what have happened, I called 120 immediately. While waiting the ambulance, I took off my coat to keep the old man warmly. In no time an ambulance came. Having helped the doctors carried him into the ambulance, I felt relieved. In my opinion, this is our duty to help those who are in troubles.

 

第一句:去掉to; while改为when 第二句: The 改为 A 第三句: our 改为 their 第四句: have 改为 had 第五句: waiting 后加for ; warmly 改为 warm 第七句: carried改为 carry 第八句: this 改为 it; troubles 改为 trouble 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,在放学回家的路上我看见一位老人摔倒在雪地里,很多过路人都没有帮助他,我拨打了120电话,并帮助医生把老人抬上救护车。 第一处:考查副词。句意:一天我正在步行回家,在这时一位老人重重摔倒在大雪覆盖的地上。句中home是副词,做状语修饰动词walk,前面不需要介词to。所以要删除to。 第二处:考查固定句式。句意:一天,放学以后我正在步行回家,在这时一位老人重重摔倒在大雪覆盖的地上。固定句式:be doing sth when…意为“正在做某事在这时(发生意料之外的事情)”。其中的when是并列连词,而不是从属连词,所以要把while改为when。 第三处:考查形容词短语。句意:很多人经过,但是没有人采取行动。形容词短语a number of许多,大量,通常修饰可数名词复数,而the number of意为“…的数量”,与句意不符。所以要把The改为A。 第四处:考查代词。句意:他们中一人说说不关他们的事。应该使用代词their指代本句主语some of them,our的含义和句意不符。所以要把our改为their。 第五处:考查时态。句意:看见所发生的事情,我立刻拨打了120。老人摔倒在我拨打120电话之前,拨打电话使用了一般过去时,老人摔倒在地要用过去完成时。所以要把have改为had。 第六处:考查固定短语。句意:在等待救护车的时候,我脱下我的衣服让老人保暖。动词短语wait for等待,名词短语the ambulance做它的宾语,所以要在waiting后面加for。 第七处:考查形容词。句意:在等待救护车的时候,我脱下我的衣服让老人保暖。句中使用形容词warm做补足语对the old man进行补充说明。而副词warmly通常做状语。所以要把warmly改为warm。 第八处:考查固定结构。句意:帮助医生把老人抬上救护车以后,我感觉很放松。动词短语help sb do sth帮助某人做某事,句中要用省略了to的不定式做宾语补足语,所以要把carried改为carry。 第九处:考查形式主语。句意:在我看来,帮助处于困境的人是我的责任。句中it是形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式收到to help those who are in trouble。所以要把this改为it。 第十处:考查介词短语。句意:在我看来,帮助处于困境的人是我的责任。句中介词短语in trouble做表语与系动词is构成系表结构。所以要把troubles改为trouble。
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