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Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern. Well, I’m now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination. We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th, on the first day of that Chinese and math will be test, the second day physics, chemistry, biology and English. Over the past ten months, they have been busy in preparing this examination. Besides listen to teachers carefully in class, we often work deeply into the night. Therefore, I believe it I can succeed. At first, I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because I came to realize that Chinese and math was very easy and English is my favorite subjects. So I suppose I can get the good marks which will enable me to enter my ideal college. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Xia
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As is known, China is a great country with a time-honored history and profound culture. While 1.(mention)Chinese culture, Chinese tea culture cannot be missed. It is the culture of making tea and drinking tea in China, which is 2. (difference) from that of Europe, Britain, and Japan.
In China, drinking tea 3.(refer)as tasting tea, which not only means distinguishing the quality of tea, but also enjoying the pleasure of falling into the dream about life while drinking tea. A short retreat from a much busier life, make a cup of tea4.taste it in a quiet place on your own, not only relieving tiredness but also refreshing 5. (you) soul heartily.
China is a country with a time-honored civilization, 6.is quite particular about ceremony and etiquette(礼节). When guests pay a visit, etiquette of making tea for guests is 7.(basic)required. When making tea, proper blending of tea8. (leaf)is quite necessary, so that favorable flavor would be created. When drinking tea with guests, pay attentions to the tea left in 9. cup of guests and it should be refilled when the cup is half-full. If 10. (accompany)with tea dessert, candies and dishes, drinking tea would be more tasteful and joyful.
Mr. Jackson was blind from birth. He owned a fruit _____ on a very busy street. ______ he was visually disabled, he ran his business pretty handsomely. He could see nothing and he could only ______ the things within his reach. ______, he was able to handle it and was content with everything he had.
One day his son came to him. He told Mr. Jackson in _____ that he read in the newspaper of a ______ who could operate on his eyes and allow him to see. The father and son traveled to the doctor and paid for the ______.
After the operation, the doctor asked Mr. Jackson,“What is the first thing you are ______ to see when I take the bandages off?”He replied, “I really want to see my beautiful ______ on my stand!”
The doctor and the son ______ Mr. Jackson down to the busy street where his fruit stand had been located for so many years. The doctor ______ unwrapped the bandages ______ he could lay his eyes on the beautiful fruit! Mr. Jackson was so full of ______ that he could finally see his life's work—taking care of his fruit! After a few hours of ______ his beautiful fruit stand, he looked down the street both ways and saw there were quite a few fruit stands in both directions. He looked ______ the street and saw many other fruit stands. He spent so much time looking at other people's fruit stands and ______ the competition that soon his own business ______.
From Mr. Jackson's failure, we should know that everyone is a ______ individual with different fingerprints, DNA and thinking. What we need to do is just be ourselves and ______ everyone else to be who they are. Mind our own business and we should never be afraid of the ______.
1.A. stand B. company C. store D. center
2.A. Because B. As C. Although D. When
3.A. remember B. describe C. imagine D. feel
4.A. Therefore B. However C. Otherwise D. Besides
5.A. pride B. doubt C. excitement D. surprise
6.A. doctor B. nurse C. chemist D. volunteer
7.A. information B. medicine C. service D. operation
8.A. nervous B. lucky C. eager D. afraid
9.A. flowers B. vegetables C. fruit D. clothing
10.A. sent B. accompanied C. followed D. invited
11.A. suddenly B. curiously C. carefully D. firmly
12.A. so that B. in case C. even if D. if only
13.A. regret B. joy C. courage D. relief
14.A. enjoying B. checking C. judging D. making
15.A. above B. within C. through D. across
16.A. preparing for B. focusing on C. worrying about D. taking up
17.A. improved B. failed C. appeared D. expanded
18.A. simple B. reliable C. unique D. perfect
19.A. force B. require C. persuade D. allow
20.A. competition B. change C. difference D. disability
Here are six diet foods that can hurt your weight loss journey.
Diet soda.
1. Drinking diet soda can make you likely to overeat. The answer is because your body is tricked into believing you’re ingesting sugar and it makes you crave more.
Microwave popcorn.
Microwave popcorn contains the organic compound diacety to give you that butter taste. Try to avoid this ingredient! 2.
Granola bars.
Commercial granola bars can be loaded with corn syrup, salt and processed oils that can add to your waistline. 3.
Veggie burgers.
Say isn’t so! Going veggie could damage your diet. Read the labels.4.Also Hexane has been found in veggie burgers. This a gasoline by-product used during the process of separating soybeans into oil.
5.
Yup. Low fat-products like yogurt can be loaded with sugar. In a cup of Stoneyfield Farm French Vanilla yogurt, there are 20-plus grams of sugar.
Blue chips.
Blue corn chips or vegetable chips are a great alternative to potato chips. But again, there needs to be portion control. They can be loaded with salt and fatty oils.
A. Roast meat.
B. Low fat yogurt
C. Diet soda can actually make you gain weight
D. You’re better off making your own popcorn
E. Some are made with processed soy and loaded with oils and butter
F. It is as important for thinking as it is for lifting, especially as we age.
G. Opt(选择)for making your own granola at home, but watch your potions.
Papa was a ranger.He worked with horses.He always wore clean clothes with a hat even when he worked.His hat was always the same kind of a cowboy hat—large black hat of heavy wool.He wore his hat full and high.I think he wanted to look taller than he really was.
Mama was proud of the way he looked when he wore his hat and his best clothes.But in some way she got the idea that papa would lose his hair if he kept wearing a heavy wool cowboy hat in the hot weather.She began to talk about his hat.
"Papa,"she said one day,"why don't you get a nice cool straw hat?That heavy wool cowboy hat may cause losing hair!"Papa laughed at her and explained that the horses wouldn't recognize him if he changed the hat.But she didn't believe him.
Mama talked and talked about the hat all summer long.At last papa answered,a little angry,"It would not the cowboy hat but a wife's talking about the hat that makes me lose my hair."
Mama had a very serious look on her face.She went straight out and later came home with a straw hat.It was a bad year for ranger and we didn't have much money.She thought that if she spent the money for a straw hat,papa would wear it.When papa saw the hat,his face got red.Without a word,he pulled the straw hat down over his head until it hid his eyes and went on to train the horses.
He was a good ranger and gentle to his horses.But as papa got close to the horses this time,they jumped high into the air,raising their front feet.All of them ran around in the rounded field and then raced toward the barn.Papa began to shout "Woo boys.Steady boys,steady." But there was nothing equal to.
Papa walked back straight to the stove in the kitchen,pushed the straw hat deep down into the fire then turned to mama,in a way that even frightened me."Now listen to me,mama.Understand this I will never wear a straw hat or any other kind of hat my horses do not like."Then he put on his wool cowboy hat and walked out of the house.
I never heard mama talk any more about hats.Perhaps,that is why when papa died many years later,there was a round spot on the top of his head where there was no hair.
1.According to the passage,a ranger is .
A. a person wearing a woolen hat
B. a position requiring clean clothes
C. a person training horses for some purpose
D. a person riding a carriage with horses
2.Mama bought papa a straw hat because .
A. most cowboys preferred to wear it
B. she was worried about his health
C. a woolen one didn't suit papa
D. it was cheap and she could save money
3.What quality can we learn from papa?
A. Gentle. B. Patient.
C. Confirmed D. Modest.
4.It can be learned from the story that .
A. this family were not rich but diligent
B. papa didn't love the straw hat and mama
C. protecting hair was very important
D. a cowboy hat was useful on farming
This could be the perfect gift for the partner,who embarrasses you on the dance floor.Smart socks,which can teach to dance,may be the answer for anyone with two left feet.
The socks have been developed as a running tool to help runners improve their skills.Thanks to the socks,users can accurately record not only how far and fast they run but also how well.It means the user maximizes their performance,and reduces damage to body and prevents hurt.The hi-tech socks are made of special fibers that watch the movements of your feet.They look,feel and can be washed like normal clothes.
Sensors(传感器)record each movement and send it by an ankle transmitter(脚踝发射器)to a smart phone. Then a “virtual coach” application shows the information and can tell the user what they are doing wrong,and help to improve skill in any task with feet.
The socks should be useful to athletes and weekend joggers."People think running is so easy and of course everybody can do it but not necessarily safely and well,"Dr Davide Vigano said.A recent study showed that between 60 and 80 percent of runners got hurt per year.This is pretty much more than any other human activity.Researchers say the technology can also be developed to teach people how to dance,play sports such as golf,or even to help to teach women to walk better in high heels.
Mr.Vigano said,“People could all benefit from the idea.We have had interest from all sorts of sports,like skiing, football,cycling and golf.Anything where you have to use your feet can use it.It could even be put in high heels to help women walk in them safely.”
Socks are just the start,and the technology could be used in gloves,hats and boots.The socks,anklet and software package,are expected to be sold for around£120,which will go on sale in March.
1.What does the underlined part "anyone with two left feet" refer to?
A. People who are disabled.
B. People who are interested in dancing.
C. People who are not good at dancing.
D. People who invented the socks.
2.What's special about fibers that the socks are made of?
A. They feel much softer than normal clothes.
B. They can monitor the movement of feet.
C. They are expensive to produce.
D. They act as a smart phone for users.
3.WHch of the following is NOT mentioned about the socks?
A. They can improve the skill of running.
B. They can help women walk better in high heels.
C. They can teach people to dance well.
D. They can be worn for days without washing.
4.According to Dr.Vigano, .
A. everyone can make good use of the smart socks
B. users can run as fast as they like with the socks
C. 60 to 80 percent of runners would like to buy the smart socks
D. no runners will get hurt,thanks to the socks