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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn't found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills,so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English,he shook his head,says it was too hard to remember the new word. He enjoyed watching TV,playing cards,smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago,he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents were great needed,he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. How he wished he has worked hard in college!

 

1.graduate 后加from 2.the改为a 3.advising改为advised 4.so改为but 5.says改为saying 6.word改为words 7.this改为these 8.great改为greatly 9.去掉what 10.has改为had 【解析】 本文介绍了我的邻居李海找不到工作,不愿意学电脑或英语,一身坏习惯,去找工作时才发现能力的重要性,悔不当初,并希望在大学努力学习就好了,让我不要向他学。 【小题1详解】graduate后加from。考查动词词组,graduate是不及物动词,graduate from…从…毕业,故加from。 【小题2详解】the改为a。考查冠词,find a job找到一份工作,没有特指的含义,前文也未提到过,故用a。 【小题3详解】advising改为advised。考查语态,"他被建议学电脑技术",为被动语态,应使用过去分词,故改为advised。 【小题4详解】so改为but。考查连词,"他曾经被建议学电脑技术""他认为太难了"为转折关系,故改为but。 【小题5详解】say改为saying。考查非谓语动词,根据前句"他摇了摇头"和后句的"说记住新单词太难了"表明后句做前句的伴随状语,由于say和he为主动关系,故用现在分词做伴随状语,故为saying。 【小题6详解】word改为words。考查名词,新单词不只一个两个,应使用复数形式。 【小题7详解】this改为these。考查代词,由于后接habits为复数,故用these。 【小题8详解】great改为greatly。考查副词,此处修饰was needed动词应为副词。 【小题9详解】what去掉。考查定语从句,后句定语从句"他浪费的"已经有了合适的关联代词,即that,而what=the time that,故去掉。 【小题10详解】has改为had。考查时态,wish后接虚拟语气,对过去的虚拟应使用had done,故改为had。 I wish 后从句用虚拟语气的三种形式 1. 表示与现在事实相反的愿望,用过去时:I wish I were a teacher. 我要是一位老师就好了。 2. 表示与过去事实相反的愿望,用过去完成时:How I wish I had seen her off at the station,but I was too busy. 我要是去车站送过她就好了,但我太忙了。 3. 表示与将来事实相反的愿望,用could / would+ / might+动词原形: I wish he would come at once. 我真希望他马上来。 类似地,以下结构也与wish情况类似(从句分三种情况): (1) If only(但愿):用法与含义均与I wish相似,以上各例中的I wish均可用If only代之,含义大致相同。(2) as if / though (好像):She loves the child as if he were her own. 她疼爱这孩子,就像是她自己的孩子一样。(与现在事实相反)/He talks as if he had been there many times. 他说起话来好像是去过那儿多次似的。(与过去事实相反)/He speaks as if he would die soon. 听他说话那语气好像不久就要死似的。(与将来事实相反)  
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Chengdu has dozens of new millionaires, Asia’s biggest building, and fancy new hotels.But for tourists like me, pandas are its top 1.(attract).

So it was a great honour to be invited backstage at the not-for-profit Panda Base, where ticket money helps pay for research. I 2.(allow) to get up close to these cute animals at the 600-acre centre. From tomorrow, I will be their UK ambassador. The title will be 3.(official) given to me at a ceremony in London. But my connection with pandas goes back 4. my days on a TV show in the mid-1980s, 5. I was the first Western TV reporter 6.(permit) to film a special unit caring for pandas rescued from starvation in the wild. My ambassadorial duties will include 7.(introduce) British visitors to the 120-plus pandas at Chengdu and others at a research centre in the misty mountains of Bifengxia.

On my recent visit, I held a lively three-month-old twin that had been rejected by 8.(it) mother. The nursery team switches him every few 9.(day) with his sister so that while one is being bottle-fed, 10. other is with mum—she never suspects.

 

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I’ve heard such a story.

On a Friday______ , a poor young artist stood at the gate of the subway station, playing his violin. The music was_____, and many people______and put some money into the _____of the young man.

The next night, the young artist took out a large piece of______and laid it on the ground. Then he began _______ The music sounded more pleasant. Some people gathered and they found the _____on that paper. “Last night, a gentleman put a(n)_____thing into my hat. Please come to get it back.” When the people saw that, they felt very curious and began to______what it could be. After about half an hour, a man ______there in a hurry and said, “It can’t be trueYou ...you ...”.

The young violinist asked, “Did you______ something?” “Lottery (彩票).”the man answered_____.

The violinist took out a lottery ticket. “Is it?” he asked.The man was too ______to say a word ...George Sang ____ a lottery ticket a few days ago. The awards()opened yesterday and he won $500,000. So lucky and excited did he feel that he ______50 dollars and put it into the hat when hearing the music. However, the lottery ticket was also thrown into the hat without being noticed. The violinist found the lottery ticket. Thinking that the owner would ______to look for it, he came back to where he was given the lottery ticket.

Someone askedthe violinist_____ he returned the lottery ticket to the man. He said, “_____ I don’t have much______ , I live happily; but if I lose_____ I  won’t be happy forever.”

1.A. morning B. afternoon C. noon D. night

2.A. quiet B. beautiful C. familiar D. exciting

3.A. slowed down B. speeded up C. passed by D. went away

4.A. wallet B. bag C. hat D. box

5.A. paper B. glass C. plastic D. cloth

6.A. working B. waiting C. singing D. playing

7.A. poems B. articles C. words D. texts

8.A. important B. fantastic C. dangerous D. interesting

9.A. talk B. care C. expect D. guess

10.A. came B. rushed C. walked D. left

11.A. get B. find C. forget D. lose

12.A. quickly B. anxiously C. seriously D. carefully

13.A. confused B. anxiously C. excited D. surprised

14.A. bought B. made C. found D. sold

15.A. handed out B. took out C. hunted for D. picked up

16.A. forget B. remember C. return D. leave

17.A. where B. why C. when D. how

18.A. If B. Why C. Because D. Although

19.A. money B. food C. time D. luck

20.A. friendship B. hope C. love D. honesty

 

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We arrived in the summer, just in time to enjoy the midnight sun. All that sunlight was fantastic for Mom’s vegetable garden. Working in the garden at midnight tended to throw her timing off, so she didn’t care much about my bedtime.

Dad was a Railway Express agent and Mom was his clerk. That left me in a mess. I usually managed to find some trouble to get into. Once I had a little fire going in the dirt basement of a hotel. I had tried to light a barrel() of paint but couldn’t really get a good fire going. The smoke got pretty bad, though, and when 1 made my exit, a crowd and the police were there to greet me. The policemen took my matches and drove me home.

Mom and Dad were occupied in the garden and Dad told the police to keep me, and they did! I had a tour of the prison before Mom rescued me. I hadn’t turned 5 yet.

As I entered kindergarten, the serious cold began to set in. Would it surprise you to know that I soon left part of my tongue on a metal handrail at school?

As for Leonhard Seppala, famous as a dog sledder, I think I knew him well because I was taken for a ride with his white dog team one Sunday. At the time I didn’t realize what a superstar he was, but I do remember the ride well. I was wrapped (包裹) heavily and well sheltered from the freezing and blowing weather.

In 1950, we moved back to Coeur d’Alene, but we got one more Alaskan adventure when Leonhard invited us eight years later by paying a visit to Idaho to attend a gathering of former neighbors of Alaska.

1.What can be inferred about the author’s family?

A. His father was a cruel man. B. His parents didn’t love him.

C. His parents used to be very busy. D. His mother didn’t have any jobs.

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A. He learned to smoke. B. He was locked in a basement.

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3.Which of the following is true?

A. Leonhard was good at driving dog sleds.

B. The author spent his whole childhood in Alaska.

C. Leonhard often visited the author’s family after 1950.

D. The author suffered a lot while taking the dog sled in Alaska.

4.What is the author’s purpose of writing the text?

A. To look back on his childhood with adventures.

B. To describe the extreme weather of Alaska.

C. To express how much he misses Leonhard.

D. To show off his pride in making trouble.

 

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Our summer vacation begins on July 15th and lasts nearly two months. Considering that my brain needs rest after a period of hard work, I, together with my family, went to our countryside, a very small farmhouse in which my grandparents used to live, to spend the summer. Obviously, life in the country is very different from that in the city.

Early in the morning I took a walk along the field side. The air was fresh and pure. With a dog following, sometimes I ran a race in the meadows covered with tall grass. Sometimes I climbed up the hill to see the sun slowly yet steadily rise from the eastern horizon. The birds also sang restlessly among the bushes. In order to appreciate the quietness of the country, I gave myself entirely to nature, with a light heart and a happy mind.

Sometimes in the afternoon I, together with my cousins, took a rod and went to the river to fish. It made the family happy when they saw me returning with a basketful of large fresh fish. When night came, I would sit at the door and tell the most wonderful and interesting stories to my cousins, who listened to the tale of wonder with open eyes and mouth.

I wish I could enjoy such calm, pure and beautiful rural life forever.

1.Why did the family live in their country home during the summer?

A. Because they didn’t like city life.

B. Because they could breathe fresh air.

C. Because the boy needed to relax after a period of hard work.

D. Because they had something to do there.

2.How did the author enjoy himself while he stayed in the country?

A. He sat in the open air all day long.

B. He got himself to nature entirely.

C. He listened to the songs sung by the birds.

D. He dreamed a lot for his future life.

3.He once made the family members happy by ______.

A. singing popular songs    B. helping others with their housework

C. telling stories    D. returning with plenty of fish

4.What’s the main idea of the passage?

A. How the boy spent his summer vacation

B. Summer holidays are part of the year for children

C. Some children are lucky to live in the country

D. Why this family came to the country

5.What does the word “meadow” in the second paragraph probably mean?

A. playground    B. sports field

C. grassland    D. grass cutter

 

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Holding the piece of paper in its mouth, the dog ran to the butcher's. It gave the paper to the butcher. The butcher read it carefully, recognized that it was really the lady's handwriting and soon did it as he was asked to. The dog was very happy, and ate the meat up at once.

At noon, the dog came to the shop again. It gave the butcher a piece of paper again. After reading it, he gave it half a pound of meat once more.

The next day, the dog came again exactly at noon. And as usual, it brought a piece of paper in the mouth. This time, the butcher did not take a look at paper, and gave the dog its meat, for he had regarded the dog as one of his customers (*people who buy sth. from a shop).

But, the dog came again at four o'clock. And the same thing happened once again. To the butcher's more surprise, it came for the third time at six o'clock, and brought with it a third piece of paper. The butcher felt a bit puzzled. He said to himself,“This is a small dog. Why does Mrs. Smith give it so much meat to eat today?”

Looking at the piece of paper, he found that there were not any words on it!

1.Mrs. Smith treated her little dog quite_________.

A. cruelly    B. fairly

C. kindly    D. friendly

2.The butcher did not give any meat to the dog __________.

A. before he felt sure that the words were really written by Mrs. Smith

B. when he found that the words on the paper were not clear

C. because he had sold out all the meat in his shop

D. until he was paid enough by Mrs. Smith

3.From its experience, the dog found that ________.

A. only the paper with Mrs. Smith's words in it could bring it meat

B. the butcher would give the meat to it whenever he saw it

C. Mrs. Smith would pay for the meat it got from the butcher

D. a piece of paper could bring it half a pound of meat

 

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