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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his hand. On the wall was a fly he took for a nail.The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they fell and broke.When the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him favor.The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had been.Before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him the accident.Looking at the spot what he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped it with all his strengths.On hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in.To her surprise, the poor old man was sitting on the floor with the palm of his hand bleed.

 

1.come---came 2.they---it 3.been去掉 4.加a 5.exact---exactly 6.Before---When 7.加of 8.what--- where 9.strengths---strength 10.bleed---bleeding 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,一位视力不好的老人把宾馆墙上的苍蝇错误当成钉子,结果打碎了一瓶酒。宾馆老板娘在墙上钉了一个真的钉子,老人外出回来以后又错把钉子当成了苍蝇,用力拍了上去导致手掌受伤流血。 第一处:考查时态。句意:一个视力正在下降的老人来住宾馆,手里拿着一瓶威士忌。本文叙述过去发生的事情,全文以一般过去时为主,本句也要使用过去时,所以要把come改为came。 第二处:考查代词。句意:他一把瓶子挂上去,瓶子就掉了下来摔碎了。主句中应使用it指代前面一句中的单数可数名词the bottle,而they通常指代复数名词。所以要把they改为it。 第三处:考查时态。句意:当女主人发现了所发生的事情,她决定帮他一个忙。动词happen意为“发生”,该词没有被动语态。所以要把been删除。 第四处:考查固定短语。句意:当女主人发现了所发生的事情,她决定帮他一个忙。动词短语do sb a favor帮某人一个忙,其中的不定冠词a是不能省略的,所以要加a。 第五处:考查副词。句意:第二天早晨当老人外出的时候,宾馆工人就在“苍蝇”所在的地方钉了一个真的钉子。在英语中副词通常做状语修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子,本句中使用副词exactly做状语修饰后面的地点状语从句,而exact通常做定语。所以要把exact改为exactly。 第六处:考查连词。句意:当老人回来的时候,威士忌酒的味道让他想起了那个事故。根据句意可知应该使用when引导时间状语从句,介绍老人回来的情况,before意为“在…之前”,与语境不符。所以要把Before改为When。 第七处:考查动词短语。句意:当老人回来的时候,威士忌酒的味道让他想起了那个事故。动词短语remind sb of sth让某人想起某事,本句中该短语做谓语,the accident做介词of的宾语,不能省略。所以要在him后面加of。 第八处:考查定语从句。句意:看着他原以为是苍蝇的点又出现了,他非常生气用全身的力气拍了下去。句中定语从句的先行词是spot,定语从句结构很完整,要用关系副词where引导这个定语从句,what是不能引导定语从句的。所以要把what改为where。 第九处:考查名词。句意:看着他原以为是苍蝇的点又出现了,他非常生气用全身的力气拍了下去。句中的名词strength在语境中意为“力气”,是一个不可数名词,没有复数形式。所以要把strengths改为strength。 第十处:考查非谓语动词。句意:让她惊讶的是,这位可怜的老人坐在地上,手掌在流血。句中with的宾语the palm与动词bleed构成主动关系,所以使用现在分词bleeding在句中做宾语补足语。所以要把bleed改为bleeding。  
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