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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10,多者(从第11处起)不计分

Dear Mr. Dyson,

I am interested in what you advertised the other day on the Internet. I would like to apply to become a assistant in your company.

I expect to graduate on Beijing University in 2019 and get a Master's degree in mechanical engineering. In the past few years, I had got experience in designing new projects and developed professionally competence in my subjects.

I worked in my holidays for a company where designed engines for jeeps. I helped them design several part of the new engine. It made me to think I would like to work in a real inventor's company. I understand that you have the qualifications and experience that you need for the personnel in your company. I would grateful if you could consider employ me in your company.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Xue

 

【解析】 本文为申请信,主要介绍了自己的受教育情况,工作经历等。 第一处为冠词错误,assistant 为元音开头,因此用an, 不用a。 第二处为介词错误,毕业于用graduate from。 第三处为时态错误。In the past few years,提示时态用现在完成时。 第四处为形容词错误。修饰competence 这个名词用形容词professional,而不用副词。 第五处为定用从句连词的错误。Company 为先行词,从句缺少主语,所以用关系代词that/which。 第六处为名词单复数错误。前面有several修饰,所以用parts。 第七处为不定式错误。Make sb do sth,不能加to。 第八处为代词错误。我认为我有资格和经验。所以you 要改为I。 第九处为谓语错误。我将充满感激,would 后加be +形容词,构成系表结构,作谓语。 第十处为非谓语错误。Consider +doing.表示考虑干某事。
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9.A. served    B. paid    C. refused    D. invited

10.A. comfort    B. smile    C. scream    D. criticize

11.A. seemed    B. happened    C. came    D. looked

12.A. pen    B. desk    C. postcard    D. book

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15.A. tell    B. feel    C. mean    D. teach

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18.A. wrote    B. hid    C. announced    D. left

19.A. advising    B. hoping    C. watching    D. guessing

20.A. surely    B. suddenly    C. hardly    D. lately

 

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C. The followers’ electrical charge.    D. The petals’ color.

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