满分5 > 高中英语试题 >

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有1...

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When asked about “Are you willingly to have a younger brother or sister”, it's possible that most student say yes.They say having a companion will help stop them feel lonely.Besides, they can learn to share things and provide other people help.The few others whom say no are afraid that their parents will love them little if they aren't the only child at home.

As for me, my answer was definitely yes.For one thing, having a companion is a great fun to me and I like to play with him or her.For other, I will have a good friend to do things with, to talk with or to share my things with.

 

【解析】 本文为议论文。本文论述了许多学生被问及“是否愿意有一个弟弟或妹妹”时大多数的态度是肯定的,并说明有一个伴的好处。 1.考查固定搭配。句意:你愿意有一个弟弟或妹妹吗?be willingly to do为固定搭配,意为“愿意做某事”,因此把willingly改为willing。 2.考查名词的复数。本句中的student前有most修饰,可知要用复数。意为“大多数的学生可能同意”,因此把student改为students。 3.考查固定搭配。stop sb. doing sth为固定搭配,意为“阻止某人做某事”。因此句中的feel改为feeling。 4.考查固定搭配。句意:他们可以学会分享东西,给他人提供帮助。provide sb.with sth.为固定搭配,意为“提供某人某物”。所以在在help前添加with。 5. 考查定语从句。分析句子可知,本句中的先行词为The few others,在定语从句中作动词say的主语。指人,作主语,要用 whom/that。故把whom改为who/that 。 6.考查比较级。句意:极少数人说不愿意,是因为害怕如果他们不是家里的独生子女,他们的父母会少爱他们一些。根据上下文的内容可知,是说与有弟弟或妹妹相比时,父母可能少会爱他们。因此本句要用比较级,故把little改为less 。 7.考查时态。本句是说现在的我,所以要用一般现在时,故把was改为is 。 8.考查固定用法。句意:首先,有一个同伴对我来说是一件非常有趣的事,我喜欢和他或她一起玩。fun,意为“乐趣”,为不可数名词,前面不用a,故去掉a。 9.考查固定用法。for one thing,…for another thing…,为固定搭配,意为“一方面,另一方面”,所以把other 改为another 。 10.考查连词。本句句意为“我会有一个好朋友一起做事情,与我交谈和分享我的东西”,根据句意可知是和“and”,而非或者“or”。因此把or改为 and。  
复制答案
考点分析:
相关试题推荐

阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

Chinese brush calligraphy or “shufa” in Chinese is one of 1. most important art forms in China.Many Asian cultures have originated their own calligraphy, but China's is unequaled because of 2. (it) beauty, grace, and history.

The 3.(origin) of Chinese brush calligraphy are unknown, but local tales say it goes back over 4,000 years to the time of the legendary(传说的) Yellow Emperor (2698 -2598 B.C.).At that time characters were carved on animal bones or tortoise shells.Only after Emperor Qin Shi Huang united China under his rule 4. one country did it really gain popularity as a common art form.

He simplified Chinese characters and regular rules were set, 5.(make) it easier for people to learn and master.This Chinese art form continued to progress and during the Tang Dynasty (618 -907 A.D.) a new type of cursive script (草书) was formed and standardized.It is written 6.(free), but is not as easy to read.

Today Chinese calligraphy is once again a subject in schools and an art form highly 7.(appreciate) across the world.Anyone can practice it and all 8. is required is a simple set including: brushes, ink, paper.It's fun for amateurs to try, but to become good at it, not only years of practice but also natural talent 9.(need).Practicing this art consistently can develop personal character and is of great 10.(beneficial) to health.

 

查看答案

Reading and writing ______is a very personal experience.Poets use language as a way of______their feelings, whether positive ones of love, happiness and hope, or negative feelings like______and fear.Poems can describe the beauty of nature, a person,a dream or a memorable event.Most______have tried writing poetry at some time,for example,at school.For children, it is a good way to explore language and have______with words as well as to express themselves.

But teachers and psychologists have found another use for poetry as a form of treatment to help people with problems.There are______for people of all different backgrounds and ages.Writing poetry can help people deal with______in their lives-death or feelings of sadness, drug or alcohol problems or serious illness.By writing down your feelings,______can learn to understand yourself better and give yourself a voice if you feel you are being ignored.A poem might be a way of telling someone something when you do not feel able to talk about it______.And just because people are______or having difficulties in their lives, it doesn't mean they have lost their sense of humor.Poems______as treatment can be funny too, as laughter is also considered to be very good medicine.

Students at a special school in Dudley, in England, read and write poems______.Their reason for writing poems is not just to be creative, but some of them they write are very good.All of them have problems.Some of them have long-term______conditions, such as cancer,while others have personality disorders or psychological problems.By writing poems students are growing______self confidence.The poems provide a  channel through______they can______with the world,and convey their feelings.They______help them to recognize and explore their problems  and to  develop a positive attitude to life.

But the poems are helping______people,too.The school has collected some of the students'poems and published them in a book which is______to raise funds for a local hospital.The book has proved very popular, giving students a sense of______.

1.A. poem    B. the poems    C. poet    D. poetry

2.A. transforming    B. conveying    C. convincing    D. impressing

3.A. excitement    B. anger    C. darkness    D. joy

4.A. people    B. students    C. writers    D. teachers

5.A. game    B. fun    C. smile    D. food

6.A. benefits    B. warmth    C. patterns    D. style

7.A. branches    B. changes    C. exercises    D. lines

8.A. I    B. they    C. she    D. you

9.A. shoulder to shoulder    B. face to face    C. hand in hand    D. eye to eye

10.A. hungry    B. ill    C. thirsty    D. happy

11.A. said    B. spoken    C. seen    D. written

12.A. some time    B. everyday    C. every day    D. sometime

13.A. salty    B. scientific    C. natural    D. medical

14.A. in    B. on    C. from    D. at

15.A. who    B. which    C. that    D. when

16.A. communicate    B. exchange    C. contradict    D. delight

17.A. either    B. too    C. yet    D. also

18.A. another    B. the other    C. other    D. the others

19.A. sells    B. sell    C. being sold    D. being selling

20.A. achievement    B. humor    C. duty    D. experience

 

查看答案

Teach Yourself How to Play a Musical Instrument

If you're low on cash but interested in learning how to play a new musical instrument, consider some of these tips.

Set a goal for yourself.

1. Is it to form a rock band with your friends, play with an orchestra, write music, or to simply play for your own enjoyment? Be realistic about your goals when you're just starting to learn how to play a new instrument.2.

Research different instruments.

Choosing an instrument takes more than just picking the one that looks the most impressive.There can be many variations(变化) in range as well as other factors that affect the sound like the number of strings on a guitar or bass.3. If so, you can see which one you're most comfortable with.

Take lessons.

Consider learning how to play a musical instrument by yourself.There are plenty of books, training videos, and online resources available.They can teach you how to play most instruments.4. Take your time while learning, but set aside some time at least every week so that you practise good habits and stay motivated.Once you've mastered basic skills, you'll be well on your way to mastering your chosen instrument.

Never stop learning.

Sometimes it might be frustrating to make little progress or tiresome to keep up with practising.5. Work hard at what you want to do and always keep improving.

A.What's more, many of them are completely free.

B.Consider carefully what kind of lessons you want.

C.Think over what you would like to get out of this experience.

D.Therefore, you have got pleasure from playing the instrument.

E.However, remember you had a goal that you wanted to achieve.

F.Most importantly, before you buy, consider trying them out for a bit first.

G.It can be time-consuming at first, but the results can be even more rewarding.

 

查看答案

    From the first use of the rocket to carry satellites into space to the setting up of space stations human beings have been putting great effort into space research And so far we have achieved many successes But there are still numerous tasks in front of us and we should not stop trying to progress

The international space station ISS is an important step we should take in space exploration It is not only helpful but also essential It provides a proper space environment for many experiments that we have wanted to do for a long time It is also a base for the observations of the earth and the universe It could also be an important base for later travel to the moon and Mars In a word if we want to explore space more the first thing we should do is to set up a space station

As the space station costs a lot of money it is hard for one country alone to establish one The USA seem to be the only country that has the ability to build a space station alone and it has tried to do so but not very successful So it aggregated many other countries to work on it together Though it is still extremely expensive it is much cheaper than doing it alone It is really a job that needs everyone's effort and will benefit everyone

Led by the US and Russia the ISS is a joint project between six space agencies involving 16countries Called the greatest achievement in human cooperation the ISS has come to the end of a tenyear's hard work in construction China has applied for participation in taking part in the project many times Unfortunately all the applications were rejected which drove China onto the path of independent development As the Long March Ⅱ﹣F/T1 carrier rocket blasted off leave the ground and successfully carried the Tiangong1into space on September 29 2011 China takes a big step toward its Space Station Era

Some West media suggested that the successful launch of Tiangong1 would disturb the balance of global space power raising concerns about "China threat" China's space project is not designed for military purpose but for developing space technology to explore space resources and make use of them for mankind's wellbeing

1.From Paragraph 2we learn that    

A. the necessity of building the international space station is not realized now

B. many experiments have been done in the international space station

C. the international space station is necessary for people to explore space more

D. people have traveled to Mars from the international space station

2.Which of the following is NOT a reason for countries' cooperation in building the international space station

A. That it requires a lot of money

B. That it needs everyone's effort

C. That it will benefit every participating country

D. That it is too far away from the earth

3.The underlined word "aggregated" in Paragraph 3 can be replaced by "     "

A. united

B. scolded

C. allowed

D. forbade

4.China wants to build its space station in order to    

A. break the balance of global space power

B. show that China can build space station alone

C. raise international concerns about "China threat"

D. make use of space peacefully for mankind's wellbeing

 

查看答案

When I was young, my mother didn't have the money to send me to school, but she thought it was important for me to keep up with education.So she decided to teach me extra lessons herself.But because she had to go to work, the only time she could do it was at 4:30 in the morning.

We need every one of you to develop your talents and your skills so that you can help us old folks solve our most difficult problems. If you quit on school—you're not just quitting on yourself, but you're quitting on your country. No one's written your destiny(命运) for you, because you write your own destiny. You make your own future.That's why today I'm calling on each of you to set your own goals for your education and do everything you can to meet them.Your goal can be something as simple as doing all your homework, paying attention in  class,  or spending some time reading a book.

But whatever you decide to do, I want you to commit to it.I want you to really work at it.I know that sometimes you get that sense from TV that you can be rich and successful without any hard work—that your ticket to success is through rapping or basketball or being a reality TV star.No one's born being good at all things. You become good at things through hard work.You're not a good athlete the first time you play a new sport.You don't hit every note the first time you sing a song.You've got to practise.

1.What can we learn from the first paragraph?

A. The writer's home was very rich.

B. The writer's mother was a teacher.

C. The writer was born in a poor family.

D. The writer didn't like reading books.

2.What does the writer want everyone to do by improving their talents and skills?

A. To quit on their country to earn more money.

B. To help solve the most difficult problems.

C. To write their own new destiny by working as a TV star.

D. To spend some time writing books about their own life.

3.Why does the writer call on everyone to set his/her own goal?

A. Because everyone's future is determined by themselves.

B. Because eyeryone's future is to do simple work.

C. Because everyone should do their homework.

D. Because everyone should pay attention in class.

4.How can people realise their great dreams?

A. By rapping.

B. By playing basketball.

C. By being a reality star.

D. By working hard.

 

查看答案
试题属性

Copyright @ 2008-2019 满分5 学习网 ManFen5.COM. All Rights Reserved.