Question

假定你是李华，你的朋友王平来信向你询问如何才能学好英语。请你根据下列要点写封回信。

要点：1.词汇很重要，利用一切时间记单词。

2. 多阅读，例如，读英语报纸、杂志等。

3. 运用网络经常听、说。

4.兴趣是最好的老师。

注意：1、词数100左右；开头语已为你写好。

2、参考词汇：记忆 memorize

Dear Peter ,

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Yours ,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Wang Ping ,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well . Here are some tips for you .

First , it is important to memorize words . Vocabulary is the most important part of language , so you should make good use of time to memorize them . Then , It also helps to read more , such as newspapers , magazines , and so on . If you do this , you will learn many new words quickly and can use them . Besides , it should be a good idea to listen to and speak English on the Internet .Only in this way can you communicate with others . In a word ,it is interest that is the best teacher.

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful .

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇书信类作文。假定你是李华，你的朋友王平来信向你询问如何才能学好英语。请你用英语给他写一封回信，要点应包括：要点：1，词汇很重要，利用一切时间记单词。2， 多阅读，例如，读英语报纸、杂志等。3， 运用网络经常听、说。4.兴趣是最好的老师。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。尤其注意一定要写出自己的建议。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be glad to，make good use of，such as，and so on，communicate with，In a word；还运用句型：If you do this , you will learn many new words quickly and can use them .这句运用了if引导的条件从句；Only in this way , can you communicate with others .这句话运用了倒装句等。并注意了句子的衔接如First，Then，If，Besides等等。