Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last month, I had a unpleasant holiday. Having visited the Australian mainland before, I planned to going to the Solomon Islands. With my disappointment, the guide cut my holiday shortly by 2 days. He also sent me to the same places I had visited them the year before. In addition, the holiday I go on included none of the activities mentioned in the travel plan. To make matters bad, I had to share a double room with someone I did not know, despite the fact I had paid for a single room. Last but not least, my luggages arrived a week late because of the delay causes by the travel agency.

Answer

①a错误，改为an

②going错误，改为go

③With错误，改为To

④shortly错误，改为short

⑤去掉them

⑥go 错误，改为went

⑦bad错误，改为worse

⑧fact后加that

⑨luggages错误，改为luggage

⑩causes错误，改为caused

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。作者介绍自己一次不愉快的假日旅行。

1.考查不定冠词。单词unpleasant是以元音因素开头，用an表示“一”，故把a改为an。

2.固定搭配。plan to do sth.计划做某事，故把going改为go。

3.考查固定词组。to one’s disappointment使某人失望的是，故把with改为To。

4.考查固定词组。cut short缩短，缩减，故把shortly改为short。

5.考查定语从句。句意：他还把我送到了我去年去过的地方。此处places是先行词，在后面的定语从句中做宾语，所以定语从句中不能出现宾语，故把them去掉。

6.考查时态。根据上文的Last month，说明句子用一般过去时态，故把go 改为went。

7.考查固定结构。To make matters worse使事情更糟糕的是，故把bad改成worse。

8.考查同位语从句。句意：我不知道，尽管我已经付了一间单人房的钱。the fact后面的I had paid for a single room.是fact的具体内容，所以在fact后加that引出同位语从句。

9.考查不可数名词。此处luggage（行李）是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故把luggages改为luggage。

10.考查过去分词做后置定语。句意：最后但并非最不重要的是，由于旅行社的延误，我的行李晚了一个星期。此处delay 和cause之间是被动关系，所以是过去分词做后置定语，故把causes改为caused。