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Smart phones had become part of our daily life. No matter who we are, we can see people busy play with their smart phones. Smart phones benefit them. They help us escape the pressure of life and get informations. However, if we spend too much time on them, we won’t have time to contact face to face our friends or family. And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning. Meanwhile, it’s absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoors activities.

 

1.第一句 had 改为have 2.第二句who 改为where, 3.play改为playing 4.第三句 benefit后的them 改为us 5.第四句 informations改为information 6.第六句will hurt will 后加be 7.第七句limit to our using去掉to 8.for a purpose a 改为the 9.第八句 absolute 改为absolutely 10.outdoors 改为outdoor 【解析】 本文是一篇说明文。现代生活中智能手机越来越普及,给人们的生活带来了很多好处,但也有很多人把大量时间花在了玩手机上,作者建议我们应该少玩手机,多参加室外活动。 第一处:考查时态。句意:智能手机已经成为了我们日常生活的一部分了。原句使用了过去完成时,句中并没有过去的过去的含义,所以现在完成时表示过去的事情延续到现在。所以要把had改为has。 第二处:考查特殊疑问词。句意:无论我们在哪里,都可以看见人们忙着玩他们的智能手机。根据语境可知,应该是“无论我们在哪里”,而不是“无论我们是谁”,表示地点,所以要把who改为where。 第三处:考查固定短语。短语be busy doing sth忙于做某事;句意:无论我们在哪里,都可以看见人们忙着玩他们的智能手机。所以要把play改为playing。 第四处:考查代词。根据下文“They help us escape the pressure of life…”可知这两句在讨论智能手机对我们有很多好处,要用us做benefit的宾语。所以要把them改为us。 第五处:考查名词单复数。名词information(信息),这是一个不可数名词,没有复数形式。所以要把informations改为information。 第六处:考查语态。句意:我们的生活学习和工作都会受到伤害。本句主语our life, study and work与hurt构成被动关系,要使用被动语态。所以要在will后面加be。 第七处:考查动词。句意:在我看来,我们应该限制使用智能手机,除了学习。动词limit(限制),这是一个及物动词,后面直接加宾语,介词to是多余的。所以要删除to。 第八处:考查冠词。名词purpose后面有介词of learning修饰,说明该词要特指强调,要使用定冠词the表示特指。所以要把a改为the。 第九处:考查副词。副词通常做状语修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子。所以本句使用副词absolutely做状语修饰necessary。句意:同时,对我们来说参加更多的室外活动是完全必要的。所以要把absolute改为absolutely。 第十处:考查形容词。句意:同时,对我们来说参加更多的室外活动是完全必要的。outdoors是副词,不能修饰activities。所以要把outdoors改为outdoor,outdoor是形容词。
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