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假如你是李华,下周你将参加主题为 My understanding of success的英语演讲比赛, 为了更好地参赛,你打算写一封电子邮件,向你的英国笔友Bill求助。要点如下

1.如何理解 success

2.请求帮助修改演讲内容;

3.表示感谢,并邀请Bill暑假来中国。

注意:1.词数100左右

2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯

3.开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数

Dear Bill,

How are you getting on these days?

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

 

Dear Bill How are you getting on these days? I am terribly busy nowadays because I am preparing for an English speech competition to be held next week with the title “My understanding of success”. But I am not sure about the speech I have worked out, so I wonder if you can give me a hand. My first problem is the understanding of “success”. I don’t know much about it and find it hard to describe my opinion in my speech. Will you be kind enough to tell me of your understanding of success? Besides, I wonder if you can help improve my speech when it is finished by myself. I would appreciate it greatly if you can do me a favor. And by the way, I'd like to invite you to visit China during this summer vacation. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生把自己当成李华,下周你将参加主题为 My understanding of success的英语演讲比赛, 为了更好地参赛,你打算写一封电子邮件,向你的英国笔友Bill求助。所以全文使用一般现在时为主的时态,并以第一人称为主。 第1步:审题。根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;要求考生以李华的身份请英国笔友Bill求助。使用一般现在时为主的时态,并以第一人称为主。 第2步:组织要点。如何理解 success;请求帮助修改演讲内容;表示感谢,并邀请Bill暑假来中国。 第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本篇范文结构完美,全文分为三部分,条理清晰。范文涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点,且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构,如多次使用了疑问句,让整篇文章富有变化,并不死板。尽量运用了高级的语法结构,如不定式做定语I am preparing for an English speech competition to be held next week.宾语从句Besides, I wonder if you can help improve my speech when it is finished by myself.等。  
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