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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’ll graduate from high school in half a year. I’m looking forward to be admitted to Hong Kong University for my college education. HKU enjoys a good reputation as its academic atmosphere or cultural tradition. It attract many outstanding students from different countries. As cheerful boy, I enjoy creating and designing objects, that gives me a great sense of achievement. Besides, I hope I can contribute to my country with my knowledges and abilities in the near future. I promise to work even more harder to meet the standard setting by HKU. I’d appreciate you if you could give me the chance.

 

【解析】 本文是一篇应用文。本文作者提出申请,希望就读香港大学。 第一处:考查固定用法。look forward to期待、期盼,后面接v+ing 形式,所以be改成being。 第二处:考查介词。香港大学因为它的学术氛围和文化传统而享有盛誉。表示“因为……”,所以as改成for。 第三处:考查连词。香港大学因为它的学术氛围和文化传统而享有盛誉。表示“并列关系”,所以or改成and。 第四处:考查时态。它吸引了许多来自不同国家的学生。表示主语现在的状态,用一般现在时,且主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词用单数,所以attract改成attracts。 第五处:考查冠词。这里表示“作为一个开朗的男孩”,泛指“一个开朗的男孩”,且cheerful的首字母发音是辅音,所以用不定冠词a,在cheerful之前加a。 第六处:考查非限制性定语从句。which gives me a great sense of achievement.作定语,修饰整个主句内容,且有逗号和主句隔开,所以which gives me a great sense of achievement.是一个非限制性定语从句,关系词在从句中作主语,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,所以that改成which。 第七处:考查名词。knowledge是不可数名词,所以knowledges改成knowledge。 第八处:考查比较级。even修饰比较级,harder已经是比较级了,more多余,所以去掉。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。“标准”和“设置”之间是被动关系,故用过去分词作定语,所以setting改成set。 第十处:考查固定句型。I’d appreciate it if如果能……的话,我将不胜感激,是固定句型,所以you改成it。
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