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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

10处错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(11处起)不计分

I’ve learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist. I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply to the position.

First of all, allow me to introduce myself. I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination. I want to find out a part-time job in the summer. I’m 18 year old and have a good command of English, especial in terms or speaking and listening. In fact, I once won the rust prize in die English speech competition hold in our school. Besides, I’m quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.

I sincerely hope you can give us a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

 

【解析】 这是一封申请信。作者从报纸上得知一家公司正在招聘一名接待人员,他对此很感兴趣并且想申请这个职位.接下来作者介绍了自己:已经高中毕业,参加完高考,今年夏天想找一份兼职,精通英语,尤其是口语和听力,事实上,曾经在学校的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖,而且,作者很外向,深受同学们的喜爱。 第一处:考查冠词。look for a receptionist"寻找一名接待人员",此处用a+单数可数名词表示泛指。故在receptionist前加a。 第二处:考查形容词be interested in"对…感兴趣",是固定搭配。故将interesting改为interested。 第三处:考查介词及固定词组。apply to意思是"适用于",apply for意思是"申请",根据句意可知此处表示"申请这个职位",故将to改为for。 第四处:考查时态。本句要表达的意思是"我"已经高中毕业,应该用现在完成时,而过去完成时had done表示"过去的过去",故将had改为have。 第五处:考查动词用法及动词短语。find"找到",find out"找出,查明",根据语境可知此处表示找到,故去掉find后的out。 第六处:考查名词。此处要表达的意思是"我是一位十八岁的男生"year应该用复数形式years。故将year改为years。 第七处:考查副词。此处用来修饰前面的动词have a good command of,因此用副词形式especially"尤其,特别"。故将especial改为especially。 第八处:考查非谓语动词作定语。此处用过去分词held的短语作后置定语修饰前面的competition,held表示被动和完成。故将hold 改为held 。 第九处:考查连词。 此处I'm quite easy-going 和后面的句子therefore very popular among my classmates不是转折关系而是顺承关系,故将but改为and。 第十处:考查人称代词。此处主语是I,因此后面要表达的是"给我一个机会",故 将us改为me。  
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