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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有2.涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:此行缺一个词在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10,多者(从第11处起)不计分

Last weekend, there was art festival in our school. Our headmaster plan to make it a feature of our school. I was so excited, for it was the first time for me to join in it.

Early in the morning, I saw such many people come to our school, made it so lively. The students gave a warm welcome to the guest. I walked around or appreciated the paintings. All of the works were from the students and I was very impressed by it. There were also some handcrafts, that were so creative. Though they were busy with their study most of the time, some students still managed to develop their hobbies. I should learn to them and develop a hobby as well as.

 

1. art前加an 2. plan---planed 3. such---so 4. made---making 5. guest---guests 6. or---and 7. it---them 8. that---which 9. to them---from them 10. as well as 去掉第二个as 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者主要讲述了在学校举办的艺术节中,自己的所见所闻及所感。 第一处:“there was art festival in our school”,分析句子结构,art festival为名词,前面缺少限定词,故添加an。 第二处:“Our headmaster plan to make it a feature of our school”,根据前句Last weekend可知,整体时态为过去时,与之相对应,故将plan改为planned。 第三处:“I saw such many people come to our school”,so many意为“很多”,为固定词组,故将such改为so。 第四处:“I saw so many people come to our school, made it so lively”,一个句子当中不能出现两个谓语动词,故将made改为making,作结果状语。 第五处:“The students gave a warm welcome to the guest”,根据前面提到so many people,可知客人不只一位,故将guest改为guests。 第六处:“I walked around or appreciated the paintings”,I walked around与appreciated the paintings之间是一种意义上的承接关系,故将or改为and。 第七处:“All of the works were from the students and I was very impressed by it”,由and可知,前后两句为并列句,根据前句中的All of the works为复数形式,与之相对应,后句指代works的代词要用代词复数形式,故将it改为them。 第八处:“There were also some handcrafts, that were so creative”,分析句子结构,There were also some handcrafts为主句,were so creative为从句,之间用逗号隔开,应该使用非限制性定语从句,故将that改为which。 第九处:“ I should learn to them ”,learn from“从…学习”,固定短语,故将to改为from。 第十处:“I should learn from them and develop a hobby as well as”,as well 用在句尾,表示“也”,故将第二个as删掉。
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2.A. walking    B. hurrying    C. jogging    D. dragging

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4.A. For example    B. In short    C. On the contrary    D. On the other hand

5.A. occupy    B. hire    C. employ    D. serve

6.A. because    B. while    C. although    D. before

7.A. wear    B. enjoy    C. miss    D. trust

8.A. think    B. annoy    C. convince    D. doubt

9.A. unhappy    B. unexpected    C. uncertain    D. unfriendly

10.A. means    B. way    C. method    D. approach

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12.A. forbid    B. limit    C. expect    D. select

13.A. Otherwise    B. Therefore    C. Besides    D. However

14.A. temper    B. care    C. step    D. energy

15.A. with    B. at    C. as    D. to

16.A. choose    B. reject    C. dismiss    D. avoid

17.A. point at    B. smile at    C. laugh at    D. glance at

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19.A. in terms of    B. in favor of    C. in spite of    D. in need of

20.A. tired    B. embarrassed    C. discouraged    D. surprised

 

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C. Hearing.    D. Touch.

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C. People who like watching TV      .    D. People who want to eat healthy food.

3.Why the researchers use “pretzels”?

A. They can make loud noise.    B. They are delicious.

C. They are more available    D. They are good for health.

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C. Want to Lose Weight? Listen to yourself Eat    D. Better Hear Than Eat

 

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