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假设你是李华,双12你从网上购买了一套英文小说,昨天才到货,且包装破损,数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下:

1.介绍购物情况;

2.反映存在问题;

3.提出解决方案。

注意:1.词数100词左右;

2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

可能用到的生词:投诉complaint

To whom it may concern,

I am one of your customers.

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

To whom it may concern, I am one of your customers. I ordered a set of English novels on your website on December 12th, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. What’s worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing. I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have the right to ask you to solve this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生把自己当成李华,双12你从网上购买了一套英文小说,昨天才到货,且包装破损,数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。全文使用一般现在时和一般过去时为主,并以第一人称为主。 第1步:审题。根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;要求考生以李华的身份向网店客服写邮件投诉。全文使用一般现在时和一般过去时为主,并以第一人称为主。 第2步:组织要点。介绍购物情况;反映存在问题;提出解决方案。 第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本篇范文结构完美,条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确,涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点,且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构,整篇文章富有变化,并不死板。尽量运用了高级的语法结构,如状语从句…the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. 在介绍所购买商品时,运用了较多的串联成分,如besides,what’s more等等。这些高级语法结构的运用提升了文章的层次,显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。  
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