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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。

Yesterday, I got hurt in a accident in the supermarket besides our school. I was just going around the corner while a strong man crashed into me with his shopping cart. It was impossible see each other before the accident because the corner was very dark and the lights didn’t even work. What’s more, the floor was very wet because it was rainy yesterday. So I fall, got knocked out and was serious hurt. Although the supermarket paid for the accident, but I still want to give some advices to the supermarket. Always get the lights checking at least once a week and make sure the floor is dry all the time, that would help make the supermarket a safer place.

 

【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,作者昨天在学校旁边的超市被别人撞伤了,为此我给超市提出了一些保证安全的建议。 第一处:考查冠词。当被修饰的词以元音音素开头,可以使用不定冠词an修饰。本句中accident就是以元音音素开头,所以使用不定冠词an修饰。句意:昨天在学校旁边的超市里的事故里我受伤了。 第二处:考查介词。介词besides除…之外;beside在…旁边;besides与句意不符。句意:昨天在学校旁边的超市里的事故里我受伤了。 第三处:考查固定句式。句式be doing sth when…正在做某事在这时….;句中的when是并列连词,意为“在这时/那时…”。而while是从属连词,连接状语从句。句意:我正要转过拐角在这时一个强壮的男人和他的购物车一起冲向我。 第四处:考查不定式用法。本句中it是形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式to see each other。句意:因为角落里很黑,想要看清对方是不可能的。 第五处:考查时态。本文讲述的是昨天在超市里发生的事情,全文都使用一般过去时,所以本句使用过去式fell做谓语动词。 第六处:考查副词。在英语中副词通常做状语修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子。本句使用副词seriously做状语修饰形容词hurt。我摔倒了,被撞受了重伤。 第七处:考查连词。在英语中只需要一个连词连接两个句子,连词although不能和but连用,所以本句要么把but删除,要么改为副词yet。句意:尽管超市做了赔偿,但我还是要给他们一些建议。 第八处:考查名词单复数。名词advice建议,是一个不可数名词,没有复数形式。所以要把advices改为advice。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。短语get sth done让某事被做;动词get的宾语sth与do构成被动关系,所以使用过去分词做宾语补足语。句意:至少一周要检查灯光一次。 第十处:考查定语从句。本句中关系代词which指代前面一句话内容,在句中做主语,引导非限制性定语从句。句意:至少一周要检查灯光一次并确保地板一直干燥,这会帮助让超市成为一个更加安全的地方。
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As winter comes, Dabaicai, or Chinese cabbage, can be seen piled up in the sidewalks in Beijing.3. (store) up cabbage before the cold weather is an annual tradition for the northerners,

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Now I have tried different jobs and finally ______ down running a big restaurant. In my lifetime, my father’s devotion to his job and his special working methods can always encourage and guide me ______ all kinds of difficulties.

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2.A. equally    B. less    C. even    D. extremely

3.A. throw    B. harvest    C. remove    D. drop

4.A. before    B. whenever    C. since    D. until

5.A. faraway    B. endless    C. challenging    D. boring

6.A. open    B. out    C. away    D. flat

7.A. angry    B. disappointed    C. hopeless    D. ashamed

8.A. read    B. disturbed    C. spoken    D. seen

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14.A. discouraged    B. faced    C. dealt    D. worked

15.A. good    B. various    C. small    D. large

16.A. confidence    B. achievement    C. failure    D. change

17.A. puzzled    B. shocked    C. delighted    D. inspired

18.A. managed    B. failed    C. succeeded    D. avoided

19.A. settled    B. broke    C. bent    D. pulled

20.A. around    B. to    C. with    D. through

 

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You bike to work every day, right?

Not every day. But most days I bike for at least part of it. So I’ll Metro and then bike from NoMa down to Navy Yard on a Bikeshare bike.

Do you stop at all stop signs?

Of course.

When you’re driving a car, have you ever shouted or shaken your fist at a bicyclist?

No, I haven’t shouted at them, but I have taken into account the kind of frustration most drivers might feel behind a cyclist. But my position is that I respect their right to be on the road and try to give them as much space as possible.

Should bicyclists be required to have licenses?

No. I think that would really cut down on the convenience of bicycling. I don’t really think it makes sense and it would be a great burden for the government to try and license all riders. What we prefer is to establish policies and make it safer for everyone.

Would you support a one-day event where people can only walk or bike or take public transportation?

That would be nice, but it might be a bit of a challenge. What we saw on the Metro closure day was that on very short notice a lot of people found other ways to get to work, and that was exciting. We offered a free day membership on Bikeshare, and we had a lot of people try it for the first time. We had 149 people join or renew that day.

1.What can we infer about most drivers driving behind a cyclist?

A. They may feel annoyed and upset.

B. They stay far away from the cyclist.

C. They show great respect to the cyclist.

D. They make way for the cyclist politely.

2.What is Jim’s attitude to bicycle licensing?

A. Supportive.    B. Cautious.

C. Negative.    D. Doubtful.

3.On the Metro closure day_______.

A. people enjoy free Bikeshare membership

B. public transportation is unavailable

C. most people walk to work

D. people have one day off

4.What does the underlined word “pedestrian” in the first paragraph mean in Chinese?

A. 乘客    B. 顾客

C. 行人    D. 过路人

 

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But lately, researchers are starting to recognize that there should be five recommendations on that list, not just four. They’re discovering that getting enough sleep is a powerful health protector as well. When researchers include enough sleep in their studies as a fifth cardio-preventive behavior change, they find that it lowers the chance of dying of heart disease even more: Adding a good seven hours of sleep a night in addition to making positive changes in diet, exercise, smoking, and alcohol intake lowers the chance of dying of heart disease by 83 percent.

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1.What does plenty of research show about the 4 common suggestions?

A. They should be reconsidered.

B. They are the best ways found so far.

C. They are not as helpful as expected.

D. They help improve people’s health.

2.What does the latest research show?

A. Various factors lead to good heart health.

B. Enough sleep contributes to good heart health.

C. Seven hours’ sleep is most important to the heart.

D. The chance of dying of heart disease has dropped.

3.How did the doctors react to the news on sleep?

A. They just ignored it.

B. They discussed it publicly.

C. They thought it made sense.

D. They totally changed their mind.

4.What does the last paragraph mainly talk about?

A. What the importance of a healthy lifestyle is.

B. Why different factors need to work together.

C. What prevents people from living healthily.

D. Why the author makes sleep his No. 1 suggestion.

 

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“I have my counselor (指导教师) who calls me every day. If I miss school for two or three days, she’ll call me, and ask, ‘Are you OK?’ ” says Omorogbe. “During the vacations, she’ll call me; for my birthday, she’ll bake me a cake.”

Ten years ago, Boston high school students like Omorogbe were far less likely to get their diploma. In 2007, the city’s graduation rate was 59 percent. This year, in 2017, the number of Boston students who graduated in four years hit a record high of 72.4 percent. Statewide, the graduation rate inched up to a record 87.5 percent from 87.3 percent last year, according to state figures.

“You’re seeing gradual progress,” says Paul Reville, a professor at Harvard’s Graduate School of Education and former Secretary of education for Massachusetts. “We’re dealing with one of the most important problems that we have in education these days, which is people dropping out without a high school education and having no place to go in our economy.”

Education experts say Boston’s record graduation rate was particularly encouraging because of the gains by the city’s African-American and Latino students in the last decade – 13.6 and 16.5 percentage points respectively.

But with roughly 5,500 kids across the state still dropping out of high school every year, professor Reville and others admit that Massachusetts, widely recognized as having the nation’s leading education system, still has a long way to go.

1.Why did Omorogbe drop out of school?

A. He had a poor family.    B. He had no interest in his studies.

C. He was seriously injured in a fight.    D. He had to take on the role of a carer.

2.What does Omorogbe think of his counselor?

A. She’s strict.    B. She’s kind-hearted.

C. She’s open-minded.    D. She’s knowledgeable.

3.Which of the following is TRUE about Boston’s high school graduation rate?

A. It reached a record 87.5 percent this year.

B. There has been a rise of over 10 percent in 10 years.

C. This year’s figures show a sharp increase over last year’s.

D. Less than half of the students could graduate 10 years ago.

4.What’s the best title for the text?

A. The success story of Mr. Omorogbe

B. Boston students are regaining their confidence

C. The important role high school education plays

D. Reforms have given fresh hope to struggling students

 

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