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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个瀨字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词下划斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限-词;

2.只允许修改10处,多科(从第11处起)不汁分。

Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at more than $ 221 billion of which Ma  owned 6%, is put in the top position among China's wealthiest. But he stays outside the list ^ the world's 10 rich people.

Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US,where he introduced to the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in a tour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang.

 

【解析】 本文是一篇人物介绍类文章。本文主要介绍了阿里巴巴的创始人马云。 第一处:whose company has been valued at more than $22 1billion of which Ma owned 6%,作定语修饰Jack Ma,所以whose company has been valued at more than $22 1billion of which Ma owned 6%,是一个定语从句,关系词在从句中作定语,所以用whose,第一句:his改为whose。 第二处:考查时态。表示主语现在的状态,用一般现在时,且主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词用单数,所以owned改为owns。 第三处:考查最高级。但是他仍然在世界最富有的前十个人之外。表示“最富有的”,用最高级,所以第二句:rich改为richest。 第四处:考查现在分词。fight与其逻辑主语young Ma之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词,第三句:Fought改为Fighting。 第五处:考查定语从句。which took him to the US,作定语修饰a translation agency,所以which took him to the US是一个定语从句,关系词在从句中作主语,所以第四句:去掉in。 第六处:考查语态。“他”和“介绍”之间是被动关系,故用被动语态,所以he后加was。 第七处:考查连词。在他偶然被委派去接见一位美国访问者杨致远之后,他的命运注定会改变。表示“在……之后”,所以第五句:before改为when/after。 第八处:考查固定句型。take sb. to do sth.带某人做某事,是固定句型,所以in改为to。 第九处:考查副词。修饰动词proved,用副词,所以obvious改为obviously。 第十处:考查代词。“马云”和“杨致远”是两个人,both表示两者,all表示三者或三者以上,所以all改为both。
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B. see the specific symptoms of the runner's high

C. identify what is responsible for the runner's high

D. test what influences the level of endocannabinoids released

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Men and  women  wearing old-fashioned,tattered(褴褛的)clothing dance in the street of towns and villages across the country during  the holiday periods. Women wear long,frilly ( 褶皱边的)skirts and men wear short trousers w.th bells attached to them. They dance to traditional folk music which is often played on traditional musical instruments.

Some groups carry heavy black sticks which they bash (击打)against each other while they dance. Other groups wave handkerchiefs in the air whilst they perform. The dances are usually performed near a pub so that when it s over, the dancers and spectators (观众)can sing some traditional folk songs over a pint of beer. The festivities (欢庆)will often continue long into the night, by which point most people are too drunk to think about performing again.

Morris dancing is a great English tradition but it’s facing a big crisis (危机).As the years go by, fewer and fewer young people are joining morris dancing groups. The dancers are getting older and older and eventually, if nothing is done to change this trend, the tradition will die out within the next few decades.

If you’ve ever had the fortune to see morris dancing, you may understand why teenagers aren’t rushing to sign up. Putting it bluntly (直截了当地),it’s not exactly the coolest thing for an 18-year-old to be doing. Why dress up in bells and funny costumes when you could be going clubbing (逛夜店)? Or playing sport? Or doing anything else?

However, it would be a great shame to lose such a fun and vibrant (有活力的)part of England’s history and culture. It’s important to look after some traditions and customs especially when it’s something as harmless and happy as morris dancing. So here's a toast to the next generation of would-be morris dancers! Let's hope they don’t leave it too late.

1.What is the article mainly about?

A. The popularity of morris dancing in the UK.

B. The origins of mortsdancing  in the UK.

C. Different  attitudes    toward morris dancing in the UK.

D. tradui0ns and development of morris dancing in the UK.

2.Which of the following is TRUE about morris dancing according to the text?

A. Dancers usually wear long dresses with bells attached.

B. People sing traditional folk music while they dance.    beers

C. Dancers perform with sticks or handkerchiefs in their hands.

D. People prefer to dance till nighttime in pubs and then stop to drink beers.

3.What crisis is morris dancing feeing?

A. There is a lack of professional dancers.

B. It is losing appeal among young people.

C. It is accused of lacking fun and variety.

D. Its traditions and customs have been forgotten.

4.What is the author’s attitude toward morris dancing?

A. It is a good way for people to stay healthy and positive.

B. It is a cultural heritage that deserves more attention.

C. It is too old-fashioned and needs to be improved.

D. It is flin and vibrant and every teenager should learn to do it.

 

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