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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dream is a common word in our daily life. As we all know, people like to use it to express the strong desires they have for our future. Some young people dreamed of becoming scientists when others wish to become astronauts.

In my opinion, what matter most is that we should be responsible our society and its citizens. I want to be independent and have a strongly sense of responsibility. And also I want to be helpful to those in the trouble. Beside, I will learn modestly from those devoted themselves to our society. I do hope all of us can make every efforts to live our dreams.

 

【解析】 本文是一篇议论文。每个人都有梦想。我希望我们所有人都能尽一切努力来实现我们的梦想。在我看来,最重要的是我们应该对我们的社会和公民负责。 1.考查形容词性物主代词。句意:众所周知,人们喜欢用它来表达他们对未来的强烈愿望。故把our改成their。 2.考查时态。句意:一些年轻人梦想成为科学家,而另一些人则希望成为宇航员。结合句意可知句子用一般现在时态,故把dreamed改成dream。 3.考查并列连词。句意:一些年轻人梦想成为科学家,而另一些人则希望成为宇航员。此处while“然而”,前后形成鲜明对比,故把when改成while。 4.考查主谓一致。句意:在我看来,最重要的是我们应该对我们的社会和公民负责。此处是what引导的主语从句,句子用一般现在时态,what是句子主语,谓语动词用单数形式,故把matter改成matters。 5.固定词组。be responsible for对---负责,故在responsible后面加for。 6.考查形容词。此处sense是名词,形容词修饰名词,故把strongly改成strong。 7.考查固定搭配。in trouble处于困境中,故把in the trouble中的the去掉。 8.考查副词。句意:此外,我将向那些致力于我们社会的人虚心学习。结合句意前后是一种递进关系,故把Beside改成Besides(另外)。 9.考查现在分词。句意:此外,我将向那些致力于我们社会的人虚心学习。此处those和devote之间是主动关系,是现在分词做后置定语,故把devoted改成devoting。 10.考查固定搭配。句意:我希望我们所有人都能尽一切努力来实现我们的梦想。固定搭配:make every effort to do sth.尽一切努力地去做某事,故把efforts改成effort。
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Stephen Hawking, a great physicist, was born in Oxford in 1942. He went to school at St. Albans. After graduation, Hawking first went to Oxford University1.he studied physics, and then he furthered his study in Cambridge University. As he2.(honest) admitted, he didn't work hard. He was a lazy student, and he did very little work.3., he still got good grades.

At the age of 20, he first noticed something wrong with him. His mother was very worried and took him4.(see) a doctor. The doctor said he had5.very serious illness and he6.(die) before he was 23.

Hearing the news, he became very sad and7.(disappoint). After coming out of the hospital, he came to know that nobody should lose hope. "Life is not fair, "he once said. “You just have to do the8.(good) .” Then he conducted some of the most important scientific9.(study) and worked at Cambridge University as a professor. His contributions10.the world will live on for many years.

 

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The following day after my business appointments, I______ the same store gain to ______.bottled water and a piece of newspaper, but a______young lady was behind the counter. As I checked  out I said, “Good afternoon” and handed her my  ______.She said nothing-not a word, not a smile or not a gesture. She just handed me my change and______ a negative tone ordered… “Next!”

It hit me light between the eyes: “Two people, the same age;______ made me feel great, and the other, well, made me feel that I had inconvenienced her by______ .

Every morning, you should ask______this important question: “Why do I want to be today? ‘The Grouch(不高兴)’  or ‘The Good News Girl’ You answer will do great good to______the joy and happiness that you will experience in your_______

1.A. at all    B. in all    C. for all    D. all for

2.A. stared    B. glared    C. glanced    D. noticed

3.A. carrying    B. taking    C. reading    D. buying

4.A. tired of    B. interested in    C. concerned about    D. fond of

5.A. columns    B. editions    C. pages    D. parts

6.A. bad    B. good    C. latest    D. interesting

7.A. collect    B. print    C. sell    D. publish

8.A. stories    B. ideas    C. concepts    D. experiences

9.A. rewards    B. the others    C. others    D. nothing

10.A. praised    B. thanked    C. appreciated    D. criticized

11.A. dropped out    B. dropped off    C. dropped on    D. dropped by

12.A. pick up    B. take up    C. bring up    D. carry up

13.A. beautiful    B. fantastic    C. different    D. stupid

14.A. card    B. money    C. dollar    D. change

15.A. with    B. at    C. through    D. in

16.A. one    B. who    C. what    D. it

17.A. moving up    B. going away    C. showing up    D. showing off

18.A. her    B. them    C. yourself    D. themselves

19.A. creating    B. determining    C. enjoying    D. guaranteeing

20.A. home    B. work    C. study    D. life

 

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Easy Ways to Boost(改善)Your Mood

1.. Taking an extra moment for yourself will make your day brighter and give you a healthier outlook on life. Here are some simple ways you can bring a little happiness into your life right now:

1. Go for a walk.

Grab your dog, best friend, or your significant other and head out on a brisk(轻快的) walk. Just a little bit of exercise can boost your mood and give you a fresh perspective(态度) on problems that have been bothering you. Think walks are boring? 2.. Take a trip to the mall, or even walk to get some frozen yogurt. Make it a fun trip and you’ll surely make it part of your routine.

2.3..

After all, laughter is the best medicine. Pick up something that makes you laugh like a funny picture, book, magazine, or a DVD of your favorite comedy. 4.. Giving yourself time to laugh boosts feel-good endorphins(胺多酚).

3. 5. .

Take a photo of yourself doing something you enjoy, like roller skating, skiing, swimming, playing an instrument, or being with friends and family.  Place the picture on your desk to remind yourself that you lead an amazing life and have lots to be happy about.

A.Model behavior

B.Try walking to a place that seems exciting to you

C.Ten minutes of relaxation can do wonders

D.Even the most optimistic people can use a mood boost every once in a while

E. Tell someone that you’re guaranteed to brighten their day

F. You could even plan a date night out to a comedy club

G. Buy something silly

 

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The Golden Egg

“I don’t want to write a story about girls! I don’t know anything about girls,” Louisa May Alcott told her publisher, Mr. Niles. But she was desperate for money. She seemed to be the only one in her family who could make money. Niles had asked her to write about something she knew, instead of the romantic adventure stories she had been writing. “So I plod away,” Alcott wrote,” though I don’t enjoy this sort of thing.” It was 1867, and the horrible Civil War was over. Now Alcott could turn her energy to making money.

Alcott wrote a simple story of life in her family, their pillow fights on Saturday nights and the amateur(业余的) plays they performed.” Our experiences may prove interesting, though I doubt it.”(Good joke,” she wrote years later.) Her book described her days growing up with four sisters in a family that had no money. She sketched a loving mother who took time to be interested in each child, and she told of the death of a beloved sister. She portrayed her family and friends in her book Little Women, Finally, in July of 1868, she finished writing. With a sigh and a headache, she sent off all 102 handwritten pages of her book.

Niles thought the book was dull, and so did Alcott. But when she received her copies of the book, Alcott thought it seemed better than expected. “Not a bit sensational,” she wrote, “ but simple and true. We really lived most of it .” Niles asked some girls to read Little Women, and they loved it. If the girls liked it, Alcott was satisfied.

In three months, all the copies of Little Women had sold. It was already time to print more books! Niles thought he could sell three or four hundred more copies.” An honest publisher and a lucky author made a dull book into a golden egg for an ugly duckling,” Alcott wrote in 1885. Later, with a great sigh of relief, she was able to write, “Paid off all the debts! Now I feel that I could die in peace. If my head holds out, I’ll do all I once hoped to do.”

1.Which of the following would be used to describe Alcott’s book?

A. Funny .    B. Boring.

C. Magic.    D. Skillful.

2.In which order did the following happen?

a. Alcott began writing Little Women

b. Niles asked Alcott to write about girls

c. Alcott wrote romantic adventure stories

d. Alcott performed plays with her sisters

e. Niles was not pleased with Alcott’s work.

A. a, b, e, d, c    B. d, c, a, b, e

C. c, b, e, d, a    D. d, c, e, b, a

3.We learn from the story that, after Little Women sold out,_________-

A. Alcott wrote another book

B. some girls started to read the book

C. Alcott paid off all her debts

D. Niles published hundreds of books girls liked

4.when she handed her first writing in Niles was__________?

A. unsatisfied with the work    B. happy about her work

C. sure of her success    D. unpleased with the publish

 

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A Competitive Sport

Over the years, cheerleading(啦啦队) has taken two primary forms: game-time cheerleading and competitive cheerleading. Game-time cheerleaders’ main goal is to entertain the crowd and lead them with team cheers, which should not be considered a sport. However, competitive cheerleading is more than a form of entertainment. It is really a competitive sport.

Competitive cheerleading includes lots of physical activity. The majority of the teams require a certain level of tumbling (翻腾运动) ability. It’s a very common thing for gymnasts, so it’s easy for them to go into competitive cheerleading. Usually these cheerleaders integrate lots of their gymnastics experience including their jumps, tumbling, and overall energy. They also perform lifts and throws. This is where the “fliers” are thrown in the air, held by “bases” in different positions that require strength and working with other teammates.

Competitive cheerleading is also an activity that is governed by rules under which a winner can be declared. It is awarded points for technique, creativity and sharpness. Usually the more difficult the action is, the better the score is. That’s why cheerleaders are trying to experience great difficulty in their performance.

Besides, there is also a strict rule of time. The whole performance has to be completed in less than three minutes and fifteen seconds, during which the cheerleaders are required to stay within a certain area. Any performance beyond the limit of time is invalid.

Another reason for the fact that competitive cheerleading is one of the hardest sports is that it has more reported injuries. According to some research, competitive cheerleading is the number one cause of serious sports injuries to women. Emergency room visits for it are five times the number than for any other sport, partially because cheerleaders don’t use protective equipment. Smiling cheerleaders are thrown into the air and move down into the arms of the teammates, which may easily cause injuries. Generally, these injuries affect all areas of the body, including wrists, shoulders, ankles, head, and neck.

There can be no doubt that competitive cheerleading is a sport with professional skills. Hopefully, it will appear in the Olympics since cheerleaders are just as athletic and physically fit as those involved in the more accepted sports. It should be noted that it is a team sport and even the smallest mistake made by one teammate can bring the score of the entire team down. So without working together to achieve the goal, first place is out of reach.

1.What is the main purpose of competitive cheerleading?

A. To compare skills of participants.

B. To make the audience feel amused.

C. To attract more people to watch events.

D. To cheer up the competitors on the court.

2.The underlined word “integrate” in Paragraph 2 probably means “______”.

A. examine    B. combine

C. identify    D. replace

3.We can learn from the passage that competitive cheerleading ______.

A. lacks necessary guidelines to follow

B. enjoys greater popularity than other sports

C. requires more designed actions than gymnastics

D. has a relatively high rate of damage to the body

4.Which of the following shows the structure of the passage?

I: Introduction    P: Point    Sp: Sub-point (次要点)    C: Conclusion

A.     B.

C.     D.

 

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