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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的下列作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词作斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第l1处起)不计分。

I often went for a morning walk because the nature is at her best in the morning. The best place I like to go is the park where is not far away my house. In the morning, I can breathe the fresh air, hear the birds singing, but enjoy the beautiful sunshine. For the whole day, I will feel happier and more relaxing. My morning walk protect me from illnesses and improves my healthy. In my opinion, the morning walk is too healthy that I can’t love them more.

 

【解析】本文为记叙文。作者喜欢早上在附近的公园散步。因为散步时可以呼吸新鲜空气,听鸟儿歌唱,享受美丽的阳光。散步不仅让作者一整天快乐放松,还让身体更健康。 1. 考查时态。句意:我经常早上散步,因为在早上大自然是最好的。根据句子中的时间状语“often”可知,本句要用一般现在时,故把went改为go。 2. 考查固定用法。nature意为“大自然,性质,天性,基本特点”,作为“大自然”讲时不加the;而如果是the nature,则意为“本质,基本特点”。本句中的nature意为“自然界”,故把the删除。 3. 考查定语从句关系词。分析句子The best place I like to go is the park where is not far away from my house.可知,本句有一个定语从句,先行词是the park,在定语从句中做主语而不是做状语。因此where改为that /which。句意:我最喜欢去的地方是离我家不远的公园。 4. 考查固定用法。far from和 far away from为固定搭配,意为“远离,离…远”。因此away改为from或者away后加 from。 5. 考查连词。分析句子可知,“呼吸新鲜空气,听到鸟儿歌唱,和享受美丽的阳光”,这三个动词是并列关系,而非转折关系。故but改为and。 6. 考查形容词。句意:一整天,我感到更快乐,更放松。relaxing意为“令人轻松的,放松的”,一般修饰物,而relaxed 意为“(人)轻松的,自在的”,一般修饰人。本句中主语“我”,是人,要用relaxed修饰。故relaxing 改为relaxed。 7. 考查主谓一致。分析句子My morning walk protect me from illnesses and improves my health可知,本句中的My morning walk是主语,是单数,所以谓语动词protect 要用单数形式,故把protect改为protects。 8. 考查名词。本句中的形容词healthy作动词improves的宾语,被 my修饰,所以要用名词形式health作宾语。因此healthy改为health。 9.考查固定搭配。so…that….为固定搭配,意为“如此….以致于….”。句意:在我看来,早上散步是如此健康,我非常喜欢它。因此把too改为so。 10. 考查代词。句意:早上散步是太健康了以至于我很喜欢它(散步)。这里代词代指walking,是不可数名词,因此把 them改为it。  
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