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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As the saying go, treat others as you would like to be treated. If we want to be treated well, and we should treat others well too.

Two years before, I was admitted to a high school. I felt proudly and superior. Therefore, I always looked down upon my classmates who turned for me in their studies. One day, Tom asked me help him work out a math problem. I glanced at it, and said, “So easy, what foolish you are!” On hear it, he said angrily, “I won’t ask you again.” I was shocking. Only then did I realize why I was so unpopular with my classmate. From then on, I tried to treat them equally and helped them with all my heart.

 

【解析】 本文通过作者的一段经历讲述了你想让别人怎么对待你,你就要怎么对待别人。如果我们想要得到善待,我们也应该善待他人。 第一处 将第一句话中的go改成goes 考查主谓一致 前半句句子的主语是the saying,为单数形式,因此谓语动词也应该用第三人称单数形式,故将go改成goes。 第二处 将第二句话中的and去掉 考查条件状语从句 在状语从句中,从句和主句之间不需要连词连接,故将and去掉。 第三处 将第三句中的before改成ago 考查副词 before指的是从过去某一时刻向前追溯,ago指的是从现在的某一时刻向前追溯,文中讲的是两年前的事,是从现在往前追溯,要用ago,故将before改成ago。 第四处 将第四句话中的proudly改成proud 考查形容词 feel为系动词,后接形容词来表示主语的状态,构成系表结构,故将proudly改成proud。 第五处 将第五句话中的for改成to 考查固定结构 turn to“求助于”,turn for“转为”。 句意:我经常看不起那些来求助我关于学习的同学。根据句意可知要用turn to,故将for改成to。 第六处 第六句话me和help中间加to 考查固定搭配 句意:一天,汤姆让我帮他做一道数学题。ask sb to do sth“请求某人做某事”,为固定结构。故在me和help中间加to。 第七处 将第七句话中的what改成how 考查感叹句引导词 what和how都可以引导感叹句,但是略有不同。what修饰名词,how修饰形容词,foolish为形容词,故将what改成how。 第八处 将第八句话中的hear改成hearing 考查动名词 on为介词,后边加动名词做宾语,故将hear改成hearing。 第九处 将第九句话中的shocking改成shocked 考查形容词辨析 句意:我很震惊。shocked“震惊的”,通常情况下指人,shocking“令人震惊的”,通常情况下指物或者指事。此处用shocked做表语表示主语的状态,修饰人。故将shocking改成shocked。 第十处 将第十句话中的classmate改成classmates 考查名词复数 句意:那时,我才意识到在我为什么不受同学们的欢迎。此处不止一位同学,而是多个同学,故将classmate改成classmates。  
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