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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者从第11处起不计分。

This winter holiday my classmates and I go to the Sunshine Welfare House for voluntary work. After we went there, we talked about how we could do for the kids over the phone. The next day, we arrived at there with gifts we had prepared, and we received a warmly welcome. Then we began to play with them. I drew picture with the older kids, and my classmates told stories to the young ones. We spent the whole afternoon with them, talked and laughing. It was getting late. We waved goodbye to him and felt delighted to able to accompany those children.

 

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。本文主要讲了这个寒假,作者和同学们一起去阳光福利院去做志愿者工作,能够陪伴福利院的孩子们,作者感觉很高兴。 第一处:考查时态。根据全文可知,本文讲述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以go改成went。 第二处:考查连词。句意:在我们去那里之前,我们在电话里谈论,我们应该为孩子们做些什么?表示“在……之前”,所以After改成Before。 第三处:考查宾语从句连接词。句意:在我们去那里之前,我们在电话里谈论,我们应该为孩子们做些什么?how we could do for the kids over the phone.作talked about的宾语,引导词在从句中作do的宾语,所以how改成what。 第四处:考查动词。there是副词,不用介词,所以“到那”用arrive there,删除at。 第五处:考查形容词。修饰名词welcome,用形容词,所以warmly改成warm。 第六处:考查名词单复数。句意:我和年长的孩子们画画儿。这里是复数意义,不是只画一幅画,所以picture改成pictures。 第七处:考查比较级。句意:我的同学们给年幼的小孩儿讲故事。与前面的the older kids相对应,所以这里也用比较级,所以young改成younger。 第八处:考查非谓语动词。talk与其逻辑主语We之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词作伴随状语,talked改成talking。 第九处:考查代词。句意:我们挥手和他们告别,能够陪伴这些孩子们,我们感觉很高兴。这里代指孩子们,所以him改成them。 第十处:考查固定短语。句意:我们挥手和他们告别,能够陪伴这些孩子们,我们感觉很高兴。be able to是固定短语,所以able之前加be。
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D. He kept a record of wildlife.

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C. The nest building.    D. The insect appearance.

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B. It challenges the previous research.

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D. It is of great value to her research.

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B. Scientists have to rely on more personal data.

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D. It contributes greatly to other personal research.

 

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