Question

假如你是李华，正在英国留学。为了让你的英国同学更好地了解中国文化，你希望可以成立一个中国文学社团(Chinese literature club). 请你参照以下要点提示，用英语给你校学生会负责人Mr. Green写一封信，申请成立该社团。要点提示:

(1)点明写信目的;

(2)介绍该社团(成立目的，活动内容等);

(3)希望能得到批准。

注意:1. 词数100左右:

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Mr. Green,

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student of this school. 1 am writing this letter to ask for permission to found a Chinese literature club.

I aim to help my British classmates have a better understanding of Chinese literature by holding a series of literature related activities, like reading Chinese poems. It is planned to recruit (招募) 25members, and as the person in charge of the club, 1 will assign a different task to them every week. Besides this, I will also organize courses about Chinese literary giants and their representative works. I am confident that the Chinese literature club will help every member a great deal, not only in learning more about foreign culture, but also in broadening their vision.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

LiHua

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封书信：正在英国留学。为了让你的英国同学更好地了解中国文化，你希望可以成立一个中国文学社团(Chinese literature club). 请你参照以下要点提示，用英语给你校学生会负责人Mr. Green写一封信，申请成立该社团。要点提示:点明写信目的;介绍该社团(成立目的，活动内容等);希望能得到批准。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：ask for permission（请求许可）；a Chinese literature club（一个中国的文化俱乐部）；in charge of the club,（负责这个俱乐部）；in broadening their vision（拓宽他们的视野）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，鱼片连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I am Li Hua, a Chinese student of this school.同位语运用巧妙；It is planned to recruit (招募) 25members句中使用被动语态；I am confident that the Chinese literature club will help every member a great deal, not only in learning more about foreign culture, but also in broadening their vision.句中运用宾语从句，同时not only---but also为文章增色添彩。