Question

孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。

内容要求：

1.描述漫画内容；

2.分析漫画所揭示的问题；

3.提出你的看法。

注意：

1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数，

2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯，

3.词数120左右，

4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇：铺路pave the way

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.______________________________

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Answer

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.  

It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

【解析】试题分析：本文属于看图说话类作文。首先要读懂图片隐含的信息；其次，分析漫画所揭示的问题；最后结合自己的看法，写出相应的总结和感受。本文书关于孩子的成长和教育问题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重，一定要突出主题。文章可采用三段式的结构，用一般现在时描述。写作的过程中一定要注意巧用连接词，巧妙衔接，合理安排。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。同位语从句的使用：It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, Shouldering the hope of their parents.倒装句的使用：Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful。