Question

人人都渴望朋友和友谊。为此，有人提出了建立，加深和保持友谊的三要素：1.诚实：建立友谊；2.慷慨大方和乐于分享：加深友谊；3.通情达理：使友谊持久。请围绕以上三点，写一篇说明文，

注意：

1.使用一般现在时态；

2.词数100左右；

3.参考词汇：understanding   adj./n.通情达理的/理解；generosity  n.慷慨大方。

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Answer

To establish a long-term friendship，we must learn three important factors：be honest，be generous and be understanding .

First, honesty is where friendship starts. Friends must trust each other. If we tell lies, our friends will find out that we aren’t reliable, which may result in losing friends. Second, generosity means sharing, aimed at helping friendship grow. But it is not involved with only money. We can share other valuable things such as studying skills and feelings, etc. Third, understanding makes our friendship last longer. If friends have quarrels , just put ourselves in our friends’ shoes, and we can understand them better, thus making up and as a result, our friendship will be stronger and stronger and last forever.

【解析】首先审题，本文是一篇说明文。文章要求以加深和保持友谊的三要素：1.诚实：建立友谊；2.慷慨大方和乐于分享：加深友谊；3.通情达理：使友谊持久，来展开说明。真正的难点在于对要点的分配和结构的把握：全文需要在准确把握这三点内容的基础上，在文章开头和结尾适当增加内容，以保证文章的完整性和流畅性。 选用正确的人称和时态，用一般现在时、第一人称来写。需要注意，三个要素的说明，要层次分明，使用First、Second、Third；在保证语法正确的基础上，使用一些复合句提升文章的文采。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了复合句。例如：使用了表语从句First, honesty is where friendship starts.和定语从句If we tell lies, our friends will find out that we aren’t reliable, which may result in losing friends.