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Hi Chris
I think going to a gym is a good way to keep health and strong. If your friend wants to be stronger, and he should try to go there more often.
Yes, there have some pills to make you look strong. Therefore, they have side effects, that will damage your health. After your friend taking this kind of pill for some time, his hair might fell out or he might have health problems, some of which may even affect her liver or heart. Some athlete, whose achievements were great, died very young because they take this kind of pill. I don’t think your friend should take the risk .
Tell your friend not take the pills because he may have health problems in the future, when it is too late.
Jeff
There once were a goat and a donkey 1. (live) on a farm. The donkey worked the hardest so the farmer 2. (feed) it the most food. Sometimes the donkey was given more food 3. it could eat. This made the goat so jealous4. it began plotting against（谋划对付）the donkey. "Hey, donkey," the goat said one day. "I think you do too much work on this farm. You carry such heavy things from morning to night. Why don't you pretend 5.（get）sick so you can take a day 6.?'' The donkey thought the goat had a great idea. So the next morning, the donkey lay in the stable（畜栏）on its side with its eyes 7.（close）.8. ( immediate ), the farmer called the doctor. After looking at the donkey, the doctor said it needed a special 9. ( medical ) made from the heart of a goat. So the farmer killed 10.goat and gave the donkey medicine made from its heart.
Arriving in Sydney on his own from India, my husband, Rashid, _______ in a hotel for a short period of time while________ a house for me and our children.
During the first week of his stay, he went out one day to do some shopping. He came back in the late afternoon to _______ that his suitcase was _______. He was extremely ____ as the suitcase had all his important ________, including his passport.
He reported the _______ to the police and then sat there，lost and ______ in a strange city, thinking of the terrible troubles of getting all the paperwork ______ again from a distant country while trying to _______ in a new one.
Late in the evening, the _______ rang. It was a stranger. He was trying to ______ my husband’s name and was asking him a lot of questions. Then he said they had found a pile of papers in their trash can that had been left out on the footpath.
My husband ______ to their home to find a kind family holding all his papers. Their young daughter had gone to the trash can and found a pile of ______ papers. Then, her parents had carefully sorted them out, ______ they had found mainly foreign addresses on most of the documents. ______ they had seen a half-written ____ in the pile in which my husband had given his new telephone number to a friend.
That family not only ______ the important documents to us that day but also restored our faith and _______ in people. Now, we ______ remember their kindness and often send a warm wish their way.
1.A. stayed B. waited C. worked D. slept
2.A. picking up B. taking up C. looking for D. paying for
3.A. discover B. know C. catch D. see
4.A. disappeared B. losing C. missed D. gone
5.A. angry B. worried C. lucky D. frightened
6.A. works B. instructions C. papers D. clothes
7.A. crime B. case C. activity D. problem
8.A. alone B. lonely C. stressful D. equal
9.A. sent B. done C. organised D. made
10.A. settle down B. put down C. cut down D. calm down
11.A. door bell B. alarm C. phone D. sound
12.A. ask B. tell C. pronounce D. judge
13.A. rushed B. walked C. flew D. drove
14.A. old B. previous C. important D. unfamiliar
15.A. because B. although C. as if D. when
16.A. In all B. At last C. At first D. In conclusion
17.A. letter B. book C. e-mail D. report
18.A. brought B. gave C. restored D. carried
19.A. friendship B. competition C. sympathy D. trust
20.A. also B. ever C. never D. still
As we know, everyone can make mistakes, but don’t worry about it. The following is what we should do when we make mistakes.
★Just admit (承认)it. Don’t think that our mistakes are caused by others. 1. Don’t blame other people, and don’t cheat ourselves, either.
★2.. In order to stop the problem from getting worse, we should act quickly to solve it. If we don’t act and deal with the problem quickly, it’ll only make us feel more stressed. Also it is necessary to make a plan of action and correct the mistake according to it. 3..
★4. . Those who have made the most mistakes can get an A, for they are the ones who have learned the most. The more we learn from our mistakes, the cleverer we are.
★5.. What caused us to make the mistake? How can we avoid making the same mistake in the future? When we act with a method to get a good result, do it that way next time. If we don’t, we should stop, think about it, change it and try again.
A. Think about what we can learn from our mistakes.
B. Be brave and face the fact that we have made the mistakes.
C. So decide quickly and act.
D. Realize that making mistakes is the best way to learn.
E. Solve it at once.
F. Don’t be afraid of failure.
G. So be away from stress.
Do you often dream at night? How do you feel when you dream? Is it useful to our health? “Dreams may be more important than sleep, and we all need to dream,” some scientists say.
Dreams take up about one quarter of our sleeping time. People have several dreams each night. Dreams are like short films. They are usually in colour. Some dreams are like old films. They come to us over and over again. That may be because the dreamer is worrying about something. Dreaming may be a way of trying to find an answer. Some people get new ideas about their work from dreams. They may have been thinking about their work all day. These thoughts can carry over into dreams.
Sometimes we wake up with a good feeling from a dream. But often we can’t remember the dream. Dreams can disappear quickly from memory.
Too much dreaming can be harmful. The more we sleep, the longer we dream. The mind is at work when we dream. That is why we may have a long sleep and still wake up tired.
1.The first paragraph tells us that dream is very ______.
A. interesting B. important
C. useful D. harmful
2.When a dream comes to somebody again and again, it shows ______.
A. he often does the work about the dream
B. somebody misses him very much
C. the dream is very important to him
D. he is worrying about something
3.According to the passage, we know dreaming can ______ sometimes.
A. hurt us badly
B. let us think over and over
C. help us find new ideas
D. wake us up early
4.The passage mainly tells us ______.
A. what a dream is
B. dreams are like films
C. too much dreaming is harmful
D. we can remember our dreams
E-mail systems at thousands of companies and government offices around the world were attacked by a virus(病毒)called “Melissa” that disguises(伪装)itself as an “important message”from a friend. In spite of a weekend of warnings，more than 50 000 computers at about 100 places around the world have been attacked by the virus，computer security experts said on Monday.
The virus began to show up last Friday and spread rapidly on Monday by making computers fire off dozens of infected(被传染的)e-mails. Although the virus causes no serious damage to a computer，its effect was far reaching.
To make matters worse，a similar virus called “Papa” was discovered on Monday. Papa is programmed to send out even more infected e-mails than Melissa.
The Melissa virus comes in the form of an e-mail，usually containing the subject line“Important Message”. It appears to be from a friend. The body of the e-mail message says，“Here is that document you asked for...,don’t show it to anyone else.” Attached(附)to the message is a document file.
Once the user opens that file，the virus digs into the user’s address book and sends infected documents to the first 50 addresses. E-mails from the Papa virus include an attached spreadsheet(电子数据文件)file. When the user opens that file，the virus sends 60 infected e-mails.
The reason why this is spreading so fast is that you are getting it from people you know. You should never open documents or attachments from people you don’t know. People who get an unexpected e-mail with the “important message” subject line should delete it immediately and not open the message.
1.Thousands of computers were attacked by the Melissa virus _______________.
A. covered with an important message
B. under cover of a message needing immediate attention
C. under the clothes of an important e-mail
D. with a beautiful coat
2.The Melissa virus made a computer _____________________.
A. receive tens of bad e-mails
B. fire at many sick e-mail messages
C. send out scores of infected messages
D. burn with a fire because of many infected e-mails
3.After the attack by the Melissa virus a computer ________________.
A. was slightly damaged
B. became entirely out of order
C. could not send out any e-mail any longer
D. would have to be thrown away
4.If you opened an infected file by Melissa virus，the virus would ______________.
A. damage the user’s address book at once
B. soon spread through the user’s list of address
C. let the first 50 addresses go out of the computer
D. change the user’s address book in the computer
