Question

假设你是李华，一批英国高中生和你校学生一起参加了为期三周的中国诗词大会（the Chinese Poetry Competition）。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。

1. 回顾诗词大会期间的活动；

2. 谈谈感想或收获；

3. 表达祝愿与期望。

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear friends.

How time flies!

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Friends,

How time flies! Three weeks have passed since we came to the Chinese Poetry Competition, which we all have benefited from.

During the three weeks, we have studied, lived and competed together, which gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. Preparing for the conference has enabled us to know each other belter. Your rich knowledge and passion for Chinese poetry leaves me a deep impression. I think all my classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.

Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.

Thank you

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文为材料作文。本文写一篇发言稿。发言稿是在公众场合向某一群体进行宣告或演说的文稿。发言稿一般可分为欢迎辞、欢送辞、演讲稿等形式。本文为欢送辞。发言稿主体部分是针对具体事件而进行的，所以在主体部分应该阐明事情的缘由和结果。发言稿往往都有一定的感染力，所以祈使句、感叹句、强调句等特殊句式被看成是一种常见表达手段。

亮点分析：本文结构完整合理，要点齐全，语言生动，有感染力。文中运用了许多高级词汇如enable sb to do sth; promote our friendship; leaves me a deep impression; on behalf of等，让文章生动有文采，增分不少。文中句式灵活多变，既有复杂句（Three weeks have passed since we came to the Chinese Poetry Competition, which we all have benefited from.），又有感叹句（How time flies!）和有非谓语（Preparing for the conference has enabled us to know each other belter.）。复合句也形式多样，定语从句（……, which gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship.）；宾语从句（I think all my classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.和I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.）这些句式的运用，使文章的有层次，体现了对语言很强的驾驭能力