Question

（题文）请以＂What I Consider Most Important in Life＂为题，写一篇作文，作文必须包括以下内容：

1. 你认为什么是生活中最重要的东西；

2. 你为什么认为它最重要。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

What I Consider Most Important in Life

There is no doubt that different people have different goals in their life, and they may have various answers to this question.________________________________________________________________

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Answer

What I Consider Most Important in Life

There is no doubt that different people have different goals in their life, and they may have various answers to this question. My opinion is that the most important thing in my life is health.

First of all, life is short for everyone. Without good health, we won’t have enough time to accomplish what we plan to do. We are entering a new century, blessed with new opportunities and faced with challenges. Without a healthy body, how can we catch up with the rapidly changing world? Meanwhile, when we have got wealth and fame but without a healthy body, we will suffer from pains caused by certain illnesses all day long. So wealth means nothing in this case. Beyond any doubt, health is more important than wealth.

To conclude, I personally believe a healthy life is the source of happiness. So let’s join hands to make our life healthier, both in body and mind.

【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求请以＂What I Consider Most Important in Life＂为题，写一篇作文，作文必须包括以下内容：1. 你认为什么是生活中最重要的东西；2. 你为什么认为它最重要。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般现在时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了表语从句My opinion is that the most important thing in my life is health. 还使用了宾语从句Without good health, we won’t have enough time to accomplish what we plan to do.