Question

世界在不停地发展，科学技术、交通、医学、能源以及环境等都在发展。请同学们预测2050年世界会变成什么样子，就其中两个方面写一篇100字左右的短文。

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Answer

Life will probably be very different in 2050.

In transport, cars will run on new, clean fuels and they will go very fast. Cars will have computers to control its speed and there won’t be any accidents. Today, many cars have computers that tell drivers exactly where they are. By 2050, the computer will control the car and drive it to your destination.

As for technology, robots will have replaced people in factories. Many factories already use robots now. Big companies prefer robots — they do not ask for pay rises or go on strike, and they work 24 hours a day. By 2050, we will see robots everywhere — in factories, schools, offices, hospitals, shops and homes.

Life in the future will be much more wonderful than now. Let’s try our best for it.

【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求世界在不停地发展，科学技术、交通、医学、能源以及环境等都在发展。请同学们预测2050年世界会变成什么样子，就其中两个方面写一篇100字左右的短文。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般将来时、第三人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句Today, many cars have computers that tell drivers exactly where they are.