Question

随着网络的发展，团购变得越来越流行。请你写一篇关于＂团购＂的短文，至少包括以下内容要点：

1. 你对团购的看法并陈述理由。

2. 请你给团购者一些有用的建议。

3. 词数100左右。

With the development of the Internet, group buying are developing rapidly and becoming more and more popular in China._________________________________________________________________

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Answer

With the development of the Internet, group buying are developing rapidly and becoming more and more popular in China. From my point of view, the advantages of group buying are obvious. For one thing, by cooperating with each other we can buy whatever we want without going out and get the most satisfactory goods at the lowest price. For another, manufacturers can sell goods on a larger scale and reduce marketing expenses.

As for suggestions for group buying, firstly, you should read the advertisements and the comments from other customers carefully. Secondly, buy with clear purpose no matter how cheap it is. Thirdly, it is better to shop on famous and reliable websites to avoid being cheated by some cheating websites.

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