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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

The other day, our school invite a famous artist to teach us what to draw bamboo in traditional Chinese style.

When the artist entered into the classroom, he received warm welcome. Firstly, he showed them a great many skillful ways to draw bamboo. We surrounded him and watched him careful. Then we tried to do it by ourselves under his instruction. Finally, after failing several times I succeeded drawing a picture of bamboo, that made me so happy.

In this lesson, we were deeply impressing by the beauty of Chinese paintings and proud of be Chinese. We hope we can have more activity of this kind in the future!

 

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。学校邀请一位著名画家来学校教画竹子,中国绘画的美丽给我们留下了深刻的印象。我们希望将来能有更多这样的活动! 1.考查时态。根据The other day,可知句子用一般过去时态,故把invite改成invited。 2.考查连接词。句意:有一天,我们学校邀请一位著名的艺术家来教我们如何用中国传统的方式画竹子。how to do sth.怎样做某事,故把what改成how。 3.考查介词。enter本身包含着into的意思,所以不能再通一句中出现,故把into去掉。 4.考查冠词。句意:当艺术家进入教室的时候,他受到了热烈的欢迎。此处是抽象名词具体化,故在warm前加a。 5.考查代词。句意:他展示给我们很多画竹子的技能。故把them改成us。 6.考查副词。副词修饰动词,故把careful.改成careful.ly。 7.考查定语从句。句意:几次失败后,我成功地画了一幅竹子的画,这让我很开心。此处整个句子做先行词,后面的非限制性定语从句用which引导,故把that改成which。 8.考查过去分词。句意:中国绘画的美丽给我们留下了深刻的印象。be impressed被感动,故把impressing改成impressed。 9.考查动名词。be proud of以---而自豪,介词of后面用动名词做宾语,故把be改成being。 10.考查名词复数。句意:我们希望将来能有更多这样的活动!根据more可知名词用复数形式,故把activity改成activities。 【点睛】 下列词不能再同一句中出现使用:.enter不能和into在同一句中使用;repeat不能和again在同一句中使用;return不能和back在同一句中使用;because/because of/as/since(因为),不能和so在用一句中出现;though/although/while/as in spite of/despite(尽管),不能和but在同一句中使用。  
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