Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

We often hear stories of animals rescued people. But now someone has managed to return the favor. The event took place on one snowy January morning where Thomas Smith was walking her dog, Jack, in the park. “As I was walking, I just saw Jack running onto the ice towards the ducks in the middle, and then he falls into the water,” said Smith. He realized he had no choice but try and save his dogs.” Finally, I got Jack by a neck and pulled him out. I don’t think of I have ever felt so cold by the time we got back to the land. When we got there, everyone was asking why Jack was okay—no one was particular worried about me!”

Answer

【解析】这是一篇记叙文。我们常听说动物救人的故事，今天却反过来了。作者托马斯在公园溜狗时，自己的狗因为追赶冰上的鸭子而掉进水里，作者只好救它。等到了岸上，人们只关心狗是否安好，却没有人担心作者。

1. 考查非谓语作定语。句意：我们经常听到动物救人的故事。分析句子We often hear stories of animals rescued people可知，句中的rescued people作定语修饰animals，而animals与 rescue是主动关系，要用动词的-ing形式。故把rescued改为rescuing。

2. 考查定语从句。句意：事件发生在一个下雪的一月早晨，那时Thomas Smith在公园里遛他的狗杰克。分析句子The event took place on one snowy January morning where Thomas Smith was walking her dog, Jack, in the park.可知，本句中的先行词one snowy January morning在从句中作时间状语，故把where改为when。

3. 考查人称代词。根据文章可知Thomas Smith是个男性，故把her改为his。

4. 考查谓语动词。本文讲述过去的事，所以谓语动词要用一般过去时，故把.falls改为fell。句意：他掉进了水里。

5. 考查固定搭配。have no choice but to do…为固定搭配，意为“别无选择只好做….”，故在try前添加to。句意：他知道别无选择，只能尽力去救他的狗。

6. 考查名词的数。分析句子可知，本文指的是托马斯的狗——杰克，只有一条狗，故不用复数。因此把dogs改为dog。

7. 考查冠词。句意：我抓住杰克的脖子把它拉出来。本文中是特指杰克的脖子，不是泛指，用特指，故把a改为the。

8. 考查宾语从句。of后面I have ever felt so cold by the time we got back to the land是个句子，而of后面只能跟名词、代词或名词性质的短语，故把of去掉。

9. 考查连词。本句意思为“当我们到陆地时，每个人都在问杰克是否（whether）有事，而不是“为什么”有事。因此把why改为if/whether。

10. 考查副词辨析。句意：没有人特别担心我。分析句子no one was particular worried about me可知，本句中的particular在句子中作状语修饰形容词worried，修饰形容词要用副词particularly，故particular改为particularly。