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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改仅限1词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tina liked running. Although she would train hard, but she always came in second or third. The girl always came in first was Jane. Tina thinks that if she could just beat Jane, she would have a chance to win. Finally, Tina got the big chance. Like usual, Jane was in the lead. Suddenly, Jane caught his foot on a tree root and stumbled. Tina ran as fast as she could stay in the lead, but Jane caught up and passed her. To make matters bad, four more girl passed her. Tina realized that, "You can’t rely on others’ misfortune to get ahead in life." That is your own hard work that will take you to the first place.

 

【解析】本文主要讲了Tina酷爱跑步,她通过一次赛跑悟得真理:只有通过自己的努力才能实现自己的目标。 第一处:考查连词。在英语中although与but不能同时使用,因此去掉but。 第二处:考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,本句谓语动词是was,且come与主语存在主谓关系,故可用动词-ing形式作定语。此处也可将其变成定语从句,即在came前加who。 第三处:考查时态。本文的主体时态是一般过去时,且此处叙述的是过去的事情,故应用一般过去时。 第四处:考查冠词。根据语境可知,此处表示一个好机会,表泛指,因此用a。 第五处:考查固定搭配。as usual"像平常一样",为固定搭配。 第六处:考查代词的指代。从上文中的 "The girl...was Jane"可知,Jane是女孩,因此应该用her。 第七处:考查非谓语动词。此处表示Tina尽最大努力跑快,以领先。故应用动词不定式作目的状语,所以填could后加to。 第八处:考查形容词的比较级。to make things/matters worse"更糟糕的是",为固定搭配。此处在句中作插入语,所以bad改成worse。 第九处:考查名词。由于girl前有four修饰,因此应该用复数形式,。 第十处:考查固定句式。分析句子结构可知,这是一个强调句,因此应该用It。  
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