假如你是李华。你参加了学校刚刚组织的英语口语大赛，并获得了一等奖，在座的评委 Ms.Monica 对你的表现进行了点评并给予了充分肯定，同时鼓励你继续努力。现在你想给她写封 email。
要求：1.词数100左右。2. 开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计人总词数。3. 可以适当增加细节，使内容更加连贯。
Dear Monica,
I am Li Hua.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, my parents took me to the seaside. As soon as we reached the beach, I ran to the sea and jump in the water. The water rolled away from us. I still remember the sound of the water hit the beach and the foam (泡沫) of water as foam in soda or beer. I looked along the beach for shell to collect. I found a beautiful one, but sudden the owner of the shell appeared from inside. I was so surprising! My father told me to leave it since it was dangerous animal. When we went home, I decided I should return all the shells back to the beach to be part of the home of crabs.
The choices people make can cause cancer. Not everyone who 1. (use) tobacco products will get cancer, but the chance of getting certain 2. (type) of cancer increases with tobacco use. The recent research 3. (show) us that the constant misuse or overuse of alcohol may cause cancer of the mouth and throat as well recently.
Sometimes cancer can be caused by radiation 4. (find) in sunlight and X-rays, in addition 5. other places. This doesn't mean you should stop getting X-rays or stay indoors, but limiting your 6. (expose) to radiation can reduce the chances of developing cancer. The X-rays you get at 7. doctor's or dentist's office are not 8. (typical) enough to cause cancer.
And sometimes, the reason 9. someone gets cancer is simply an unfortunate mystery. Some cells in the body may start to increase and change. Doctors and researchers can see it happening, 10. they cannot provide a description of why it started.
_____himself with routine office tasks, he had no time to accompany his children.
A. Occupied B. Occupying
C. Being occupied D. To be occupied
I didn't become a serious climber until the fifth grade, _____ I went up to rescue a kite that was stuck in the branches of a tree.
A. when B. where
C. which D. why
Although he is considered a great writer, _____.
A. but his works are not widely read B. his works are not widely read
C. however, his works are not widely read D. while his works are not widely read
