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假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Be an excellent student with all-round development, Li Hua has been honored as Star of all the subjects but often ranks among the top three in the class. After class, she is active in the playground, music club and some community. The sport he likes most is playing the basketball. He also took great delight in Chinese opera as well singing pop songs. Besides, he takes an actively part in all sorts of social practices. In a word, Li Hua is an outstanding student, which has set a good example to us.

 

【解析】1.Be 改为Being 考查非谓语。作为一名全面发展的优秀学生,李华被誉为学科的明星。Be与李华是主动关系 ,故要用动词ing。 2.but改为and. 考查连词。句意:作为一名全面发展的优秀学生,李华被评为所有学科的明星,而且在班上排在前三名。分析句意可知前后是递进关系,故把but改为and。 3.she 改为he 考查代词。句意:课下,他在操场、音乐俱乐部和一些社区很活跃。根据内容可知李华是个男的,故要用he。 4community改为communities 考查名词的数。some community一些社区,所以community,要用复数,故把community改为communities。 5.去掉the 考查固定搭配。句意:他最喜欢的运动是打篮球。三餐和球类前不加冠词,打篮球,为play basketball,为固定搭配,故去掉the。 6.took改为takes... 考查谓语动词的时态。句意:他也很喜欢中国歌剧, 喜欢唱流行歌曲。本文主要讲述李华的现在的一些事情,可知用一般现在时,故要把took改为takes。 7.在as well后添加as. 考查固定搭配。句意; as well,也,和,如果后面有宾语,要加as。在文中 as well 后有宾语 sing pop songw,故要加as,因此在as well后添加as。 8.actively改为active 考查形容词作定语。句意:他积极参加各种社会实践活动。Actively用于修饰名词part,副词不能修饰名词,故把actively改为active。 9.which改为who 考查定语从句的关系词。句意:李华是个杰出的学生,给我们树立了好榜样。student,是先行词,在从句中作主语,指人,不能用which只能用who,故把which改为who。 10.to 改为for 考查固定搭配。句意:李华是个杰出的学生,给我们树立了好榜样。set a good example for,为……树立榜样,为固定搭配,故要把to 改为for.  
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