Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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Answer

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考查固定短语。a meaningful effect on一个有意义的影响, 是固定短语，所以meaningful之前加a。

考查名词单复数。many修饰可数名词复数形式，所以benefit改成 benefits。

考查主谓一致。动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数，所以enable改成 enables。

考查非限制性定语从句。which lays a solid foundation for your future life. 是一个非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，所以that改成which。

考查形容词。修饰名词knowledge，用形容词，所以use改成useful。

考查定语从句。that can’t be learnt at school. 是一个定语从句，修饰先行词knowledge，关系词在从句中作主语，所以去掉it。

考查固定用法。in addition另外、此外，是固定用法，所以on改成in。

考查语态。Society与 create之间是被动关系，所以用被动语态，create改成 created。

考查非谓语动词。offer与其逻辑主语we之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词作时间状语，offered 改成offering。

考查副词。因此，志愿者活动有许多的好处，不仅对其他人有好处，对我们自己也有好处，However改成therefore。