Question

假如你是李华，就读于一所寄宿制高中。你的表弟刘明也要来这所学校读高一，请用英文写一封信给他一些校园学习生活的建议。你的主要内容应包括：

1.努力学习；

2.多参加课外活动；

3.与室友友好相处。

要求：词数100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Liu Ming,

I am very glad to hear that you are going to study at the same high school as I.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Liu Ming,

I am very glad to hear that you are going to study at the same high school as I. As a senior, I just can’t wait to share with you some practical experience of studying and living here.

First, study is without doubt the most important thing to you. It is the only way to the door of your dreaming college. So spare no effort to study and make your dream come true. Second, you will have a lot of chances to take part in many activities. Getting involved in clubs, sports, or other pursuits outside the classroom can give you new skills and help you to know yourself. Last but not the least, it is of great importance to get along with your roommates in a boarding school, which can make your life easier and more colorful.

Best wishes for you! Hope you can gain an unforgettable experience here.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是你的建议：努力学习；多参加课外活动；与室友友好相处。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇书信，格式正确，要点齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级词组和句子。Getting involved in clubs, sports, or other pursuits outside the classroom can give you new skills and help you to know yourself.动名词短语做主语；it is of great importance to get along with your roommates in a boarding school, which can make your life easier and more colorful.which引导非限制性定语从句；另外，without doubt，Second, spare no effort，Last but not the least,等的运用为文章增色添彩。